Interesting

"Review After reading the first two chapters, I think this story has a very interesting premise and a lot of potential. The story combines fantasy, magic, demons, and a bit of mystery, which is definitely the kind of setting I enjoy. There are already some intriguing questions introduced early on, and I’m curious to see how the characters and the world develop as the story progresses. Since this is only the beginning, I think there is still plenty of room for the world-building and characters to grow. One thing I would particularly like to see more of is the world itself. I think giving the setting more distinctive details, especially around the magical aspects of the story, could make it feel even more immersive and help readers understand the kind of world they’ve stepped into. Overall, I enjoyed the concept and I think the story has a strong foundation to build on. I’m interested to see how the mysteries introduced in these first chapters unfold and where the story takes its characters next."