Beelzebufo

"Intriguing title and implied concept. My mind went from the Divine/Cosmic Turtle to Hypnotoad and the Plagues of Egypt. Maybe that was your intent. Maybe not. A combination with immense potential. Except, unfortunately, the vast cast of characters and brash humor both felt forced and fell flat. I think, with some major edits, reigning in the random bits (that detract from the overall invasion) and a smattering of historical references, it has a hellishly bright future."