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Great Story!

"Love how the "past" is interwoven with the present..and the present is in a Walmart. The ending is very touching, albeit sad. Very much enjoyed the word play with the song lyrics, too! A wonderful tale of love and loss interspersed with the sad fate of the elderly veteran. Overall a very good read!"

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