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"Then my alarm went off in my ear and I rolled over to realize I needed to rise and shine. First day of a new school year. Not that I couldn't be persuaded to stay home and write a book about that weird dream that just had me. Man, where did that come from? Probably first day of school jitters. I rolled out of bed anyway against my better judgement and was intending to go take my first day of school leak only as soon as my feet hit what I thought was the floor I found myself falling and falling and falling...I was flailing my arms wildly and beginning to roll around in mid air when suddenly the alarm I set to wake me early for my first day of school went off and I woke up and realized I had kicked all my blankets and pillows into the floor. I laid there a moment not sure if I should even blink an eye after that weird dream within a dream within a dream. but that damn alarm just would not shut up. I sighed and chuckled at myself for allowing something so silly upset me before I even woke up. Once I silenced the nerve monster I laid back down intending to take my time in rising when suddenly my girlfang started tingling and I knew something was wrong..."

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