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Really enjoyed this story

"I really enjoyed this story. It didn’t feel rushed, and just overall sweet. "

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Boredom Induced Coma

"Wish I could say I enjoyed this story, but I tried and failed. The relationship between the main characters was like reading about the most uninteresting merger. There was no passion between them, and their personalities were unnecessarily uptight and one dimensional. With the author’s ambitions to create a toxic/drama free love story they missed the key factors that make love worthwhile. Passion, excitement, adventure, spontaneity, and magic. What’s a love story without those key fundamentals, it’s also possible to make it toxic and drama free without losing these important elements. Unfortunately this story lacked anything pertaining to capturing your audience😒💀"

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