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The Room That Wasn't There

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Summary

At exactly 3:13 AM, Maya discovers a black door that shouldn't exist. The next morning, it's gone. But something behind that door knows her name... And it has been waiting for her.

Genre
Horror
Author
Uzairtariq
Status
Excerpt
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1 The Door at 3:13

I knew from the very first night in that house that we were not alone.

At exactly 3:13 AM, my eyes suddenly opened.

I didn't know why.

There was just this strange feeling... as if someone was watching me.

I stayed completely still for a few seconds.

Then I heard it.

Knock.

Someone knocked on my bedroom door.

I held my breath.

Knock.

This time, harder.

"Mom?" I whispered.

There was no answer.

I got out of bed and walked toward the door.

My hand was just about to reach the handle when I heard a voice from outside.

"Maya..."

I froze.

It was my mom's voice.

"Open the door."

I grabbed the handle.

Then I remembered something.

My mom's bedroom was downstairs, not directly across from mine.

I looked through the peephole.

The hallway was empty.

Completely empty.

But at the end of the hallway...

there was a door.

I had never seen that door before.

An old, black door.

A faint light was coming from underneath it.

And in the light...

I could see someone's feet.

I stepped backward.

Then the feet slowly disappeared beneath the door.

My heart started beating faster.

Suddenly, my phone screen turned on by itself.

3:13 AM

There was a notification.

Unknown number:

"You saw the door."

My hands began to tremble.

I read the message again.

Then another message appeared.

"Now it's watching you too."

I immediately looked through the peephole.

The hallway was still empty.

But the black door...

was open.

There was darkness inside.

And then...

I heard my own voice coming from the darkness.

"Please..."

My breath stopped.

I hadn't said anything.

Then my voice came again.

This time, much closer.

"Maya... open the door."

I pulled my eye away from the peephole.

But then I realized something-

The voice wasn't coming from the door at the end of hallway.

It was coming from inside my bedroom.

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