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"This chapter has a calm, relatable opening, and I really like Mira’s determination to become a judge and her friendship with Amara. ❤️ The dialogue feels natural and the little meat-pie moment adds warmth and personality to both characters. I’m already curious about Amara’s “news” and how it will change Mira’s life, so I’d definitely continue reading! 📖✨ This chapter does a great job of turning Mira’s internship into an intriguing mystery, and I really liked how the seemingly simple case gradually becomes more complicated. ❤️ Mira’s attention to detail makes her feel intelligent and determined, while the final mention of Dami creates a strong emotional hook that makes me want to know who he is and what happened between them. 📖✨"

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