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Books over people. I like the repeated never construction in the opening paragraph and the chapter rolls on from there

"Books over people. I love the repeated never construction in the opening paragraph and the chapter rolls on from there into a, "gulp" library! My favorite! The library setting Is the most underused and powerful because it boils with possibilities from romance to humor. I encourage you to go, go GO! with this."

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"The opening was excellent, and you have written with great quality and depth."

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