I think it's an amazing novel but it's a little obvi she's a Rookie but I actually like this good work done and can you add more suspense to the next chapter thanksssss and the punctuating was quite good and she also made good use of her words I could actually tell what you were trying to mean a very good book 📖 😉

"I think it's an amazing novel but it's a little obvi she's a Rookie but I actually like this good work done and can you add more suspense to the next chapter thanksssss and the punctuating was quite good and she also made good use of her words I could actually tell what you were trying to mean a very good book 📖 😉 "