Room 722 by Alicia Hazelton at Inkitt
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Room 722

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Summary

After hotel trainee Jack Seles discovers a murdered escort in Room 722, journalist Leah Schachter notices the missing-eye mutilation matches the unsolved murder of student Kiki Wilson. Leah's investigation into the corporate booking accounts behind the room uncovers *Club Tiang Sheng Rianjen*, an elite front for human trafficking and snuff murders. A police raid shuts down the operation, culminating in a front-page exposé that connects the serial crimes.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1


I. Four A.M. — Marriott Hotel, Munich, Seventh Floor

Jack Seles loved the night shift.

Growing up, he had to be in bed by ten. As a hotel trainee he finally got to see the quiet hours.

He and his friend Mark pushed a newspaper trolley into the elevator.

“We start at 701,” Mark said.

“Okay.”

“Where were you yesterday during the trainee cultural program?”

“Just hanging out.”

“With Perry?” Mark teased.

“Yeah. We went to the pool. The attendants thought we were guests.”

“Doesn’t she have a boyfriend?

“We’re just friends. She made that clear.”

“Ouch.”

They stepped out onto the east corridor. The halls were quiet. They worked carefully, sliding newspapers under each door.

Halfway down they stopped. The door to 722 stood slightly open.

Jack frowned. The night staff was in the west wing. Why would a guest leave the door open at this hour?

“Mark, go get Kani,” Jack said.

“Okay. But wait for us. Don’t go in.”

Fifteen minutes passed. Jack grew restless. Curiosity won. He stepped inside.

Lights on. Bed empty and unmade. No luggage. He was turning to leave when he heard water dripping.

He slid open the bathroom door and switched on the light.

A hand hung over the edge of the bathtub. A young woman lay half-submerged. Something heavy was tied around her waist to keep her under. One eye was missing. Blood ran down her cheek onto the porcelain.

Jack froze, hand over his mouth.

“Jack, you in?” Mark called from the doorway.

Kani appeared behind Mark. “What are you doing?”

Then she saw. Both hands flew to her mouth.

“Mark—get someone from the desk,” she managed.

II. The Night Before — Room 722

Cathy did not speak German. She did not need to. Her work was simple and she was good at it.

She stepped out of her clothes and stood naked in front of the two clients.

They shared the same sharp bone structure; only their hair color differed. The woman, mid-twenties, stayed fully dressed. The man was already naked.

She likes to watch, Cathy thought.

On the muted television the Terminator dug a damaged eye out with a knife. Neither client looked at the screen.

“Where do you want me?” Cathy asked, twirling a curl.

The man pointed to the bed.

She sat, handed him a condom, and lay back. He entered her and began to move. After a few strokes he lost his erection. She stroked him until he hardened again. The same thing happened a second time. Frustration showed on his face.

“How do you take care of your woman?” she teased. “Do you jerk off a lot?”

He nodded.

The woman stood, inserted a disc into the player, and pressed play.

At first Cathy thought it was revange porn. A man dragged a woman into bushes, tied and gagged her, forced her legs open. When she struggled he struck her jaw.

Then he raped her.

The client’s erection returned. He thrust harder. Cathy began to enjoy the rhythm—until the video changed.

The man on screen pulled out a knife. He stabbed the woman three times, twice hesitating when someone passed. Then he choked her until she stopped moving.

Cathy’s throat closed. This was not porn. It was a real murder.

The woman leaned in and kissed her deeply. The man grunted, close to finishing.

Please let me leave this room, Cathy prayed.

He pulled out.

The woman guided Cathy to the bathroom and told her to sit in the cold tub. Another kiss. Then hands forced her head under the water.

Cathy fought, but the pressure held. Her lungs emptied. Darkness closed in.

III. The Following Evening — Hotel Pool Terrace

Leah Schachter studied the pebble art of the Courtyard logo. She had worked at a Marriott once, before journalism school. The memories were still warm.

Below, the open pool area was set for a small banquet. Four candlelit tables, an L-shaped bar, buffet trays being labeled. Servers in maroon shirts moved with quiet efficiency. City lights glittered beyond the glass.

The guest of honor arrived: Adrian Wentzel, Munich’s star crime reporter. He joined Iris Spranger, Leah’s editor at the Munich Times, at a nearby table.

“Have you heard of the Catherine Genovese case?” the commissioner asked.

“Nineteen sixty-four, New York,” Iris said.

Leah looked it up on her phone.

A woman stabbed in three separate attacks over thirty-five minutes while thirty-eight neighbors watched or listened. No one called the police until it was too late.

A waiter offered fish tartare. Leah declined.

She was still reading when Laura Zimmerman tapped her shoulder.

“Laura!”

“What are you up to?”

“Nothing much. How’s Bryan?”

“Same as always. Last night I made pasta. He said it tasted wrong. And if I leave a dish in the sink he cleans it immediately. Thinks I’m lazy.”

“Aren’t you?”

Laura grinned and punched her arm.

“Come on. I’m starving."

They headed for the buffet.

V. Six Days Earlier — The Art Institute

Kiki knew what the boy wanted. Part of her wanted it too. They had dated on and off—movies, malls, awkward first kisses. She had stopped him more than once when things went further. He grew frustrated.

Friends called her a tease.

Eventually she gave in, then pulled away again. The relationship burned out.

She sat alone on a park bench, watching the fountain, eyes closed.

Hands seized her from behind. She was dragged into the bushes. A fist drove into her chest. Cloth gagged her mouth. Wrists were bound. He yanked her jeans down. When she fought he struck her jaw and the world went gray.

She came to with him forcing her legs apart. Her mind went blank with shame and terror. A camera lens caught the light. The recording would never end.

He finished. Then the knife appeared. Three stabs—twice he hesitated when a passer-by or a dog came near. No one looked their way. His hands closed around her throat.

The last thought that reached her was the boy’s face. She wished she could have said goodbye.

Her eyes closed.

V. One Week Later — Munich Times Newsroom

Leah’s article on the Art Institute murder ran on the front page. The lead paragraphs set the tone:

The nude body of Kiki Wilson, 21, was found Friday in dense shrubbery beside the Art Institute wall by a twelve-year-old boy. Police believe she was attacked near the south-plaza fountain and dragged into the bushes. She appears to have been sexually assaulted. Hundreds of people must have passed the site. No one reported seeing or hearing anything.

At eight that evening the office was empty except for Leah. Laura brought her coffee.

“Great job on the story.”

“She was beautiful,” Leah said. “Her eyes had a spark. The papers left one detail out—she was missing an eye.

Like something out of Oedipus. Scorpio. Loved John Green novels. Sometimes it feels like the universe only takes the ones who are still hungry for life.”

“Maybe it was just her time.”

“Maybe. The missing eye could be coincidence. Or a copycat.”

Laura took her hand. “The night’s young. Let’s get out of here.”

VI. The Hotel, Three Days Later

He mentioned all of it, eventually, to a journalist who’d started showing up at the hotel bar asking careful questions and buying nobody drinks she didn’t need to.

“You found her,” Leah said looking at Jack. It wasn’t a question.

“I did.”

Jack wasn’t supposed to know anything , but night-shift trainees hear things day staff don’t.

He heard Kani, on a smoke break, tell another employee that

the booking for 722 had gone through a corporate account that traced back to an escort agency the hotel had unofficially blacklisted two years earlier, for reasons nobody in management would put in writing.

Leah turned her notebook so he could see the page: a photo of Kiki Wilson, and beside it, in Leah’s small cramped handwriting, a list.

Missing eye. Three stab wounds. Hesitation marks — passerby interrupted twice.

“Does any of that match what you saw?”

Jack thought about the water, the weight tied at Cathy’s waist, the wound at her temple he’d assumed was from the fall. He hadn’t let himself really look at the rest.

“I don’t know,” he said. “But I can find out who booked that account before.”

VII. Club Tiang Sheng Rianjen

Sonja had only wanted quick money—dinner dates that paid. The first client was rough. The second refused to stop. The agency, she learned too late, was a front.

The club sat behind high iron gates and cameras, three stories, seventy rooms, electronic locks. Clients paid top prices for absolute privacy. Girls who entered left only in body bags.

Drugs kept the women quiet and compliant. Some were barely thirteen; makeup made them look older. The men and women who paid chose freely. When the orgy ended, the killing began. Screams, blood, laughter.

Sonja felt the blade in her gut. Blood ran down her side. Her mind stayed empty. This was the end she had been waiting for.

Then gunfire. Men in black poured down the stairs. One of them covered her with a blanket and shone a light into her eyes.

“You’re going to be okay,” he said.

VIII. Epilogue

The story Leah filed three weeks later ran under both their names, at her insistence — hers and Jack’s, hotel trainee turned unlikely source.

It named the club without naming its members, pending indictments; named the siblings; connected Kiki Wilson and Cathy and four other cases the department had never linked in public.

Jack read it twice at the front desk before his shift, then put the paper down and went back to pushing the trolley, because somebody still had to get the news to room 722.

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