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Loving this so far

"This story really draws you in. The characters jump off the page and the author’s word really build. They make you feel truly connected to the characters. I have become totally invested in their lives inside this book. This world is truly alive! The way you want to hope that everything works out for Lillian. The love you sense from her friends. And the way you just want to reach into the book and wake Oliver up! Truly truly captivating! Thank you for putting this work out there for us readers to enjoy! Keep up the great work!"

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A MUST A READ !!

"I think this is one of the most wonderful stories i have ever read although i just read two chapters but the story line is too amazing to be ignored , I am so much curious that how do they end up together as she loved him and he was kind of a play boy and wanted to get back with the girl he broke up , while she was sitting there thinking will she ever be able to tell him the truth , The plot is amazing and the story has great potential"

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I Can't Stop Reading! ❤️

"’m really enjoying this story! The characters are engaging, the family dynamics are wonderfully chaotic, and every chapter seems to leave me curious about what will happen next. Lilian has completely won me over, and I’m already emotionally invested in her story. There’s romance, humor, drama, and plenty of unexpected moments. Definitely a story that makes you want to keep reading! ❤️📖"

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Aristocracy101

"NO WAYYY I just clicked in here, and HELLOOO?? This book is just TOO good, and caught my attention for so long, I can't wait to continue reading this~ Lilian is definitely my favourite character, along with Zoey, and I really want to see what happens next with Bella and Lilian...Oliver needs to improve too, just actually understand who really loves you.....Anyway, I love this book! Keep it up~"

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PEAK! Highly recommended to everyone!

"The story surrounds two characters- Lilian and Oliver who are broken from very deep down that no one can see. Child friendship to toxic marriage relationship filled with misunderstanding. How will they end up? The story and plot is really good. The writing style is really praiseworthy. I have read only 6 chapters and I'm gonna finish it because I'm seriously hooked from the very first ch. Every chapter is makes you climb the high hills only to push you down. because it's just too good. I recommend it to everyone. Ready for the ups and downs? "

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Intresting and thought provoking

"Not the typical kind of romance high society stories usually that comes into our reading but something definitely new. Definitely the one to be recommended!! I especially took a good liking in the characters, some of them are just way too relatable 👏 The author has really done a good job"

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This tricks you

"At first, I was confused as to where the plot was headed. Lillian clearly has chosen a man who doesn't like her, makes frankly rude comments, and also has a strict family. Oliver also being a playboy didn't seem attractive to me as a potential partner for Lillian. I was praying Lillian didn't end up with Oliver in the past couple of chapters I read. I thought that since the family is trying to force them together, this would turn into the generic slow-burn or forced proximity. I was very wrong and happy about it. The second Bella came around, the plot shifted into a storyline I couldn't guess at all. I was left in utter shock. Her ability to change events and use it to her advantage is strong. The families not only have a planned-out way to secure their arranged marriage between Oliver and Lillian. Bella is also an outside force to definitely watch out for. Even though this started with Lillian, I feel so bad for her. The characters are consistent, and there is enough information for me to understand why they act the way they do. I think the only confusing thing to me is Lillian's crush on Oliver. I wish he showcased a bit more positive traits for me to really believe what she says about him. Other than that, this is a good story. If anyone likes twists and surprises, I would definitely recommend this story. I honestly hope to finish reading it all. "

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wonderful combination

"okay, so reading the whole story was awesome, and as much i have observed its perfect combination of western and eastern romance. the plot is greatly compelling "

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Love this

"I loved every second of this. Oliver irritated me, then annoyed me, and now I simply regret judging him. I love how well written and compelling this story was! I can't wait to read the next chapter!"

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Highly recomended

"An absolutely beautiful and deeply atmospheric chapters. The author's writing style is incredebily engaging, smooth and full of emotion. A high-quality start that showa so much potential. Highly recomended!🤍⭐️"

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Interesting storyline

"I didn't know what to expect from this story at the beginning but as the story unfolds in every single chapter, it's really amazing. I love Lilian so much, she is my fav so far, confident, bold and charismatic, my diva. The story didn't bore me at all, it keeps the natural pace with nice twist and turns. Looking forward to how this story continues."

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Loved it

"The book is captivating so far. I am thoroughly enjoying it."

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A twisted and addictive novel

"I enjoyed this story! It triggers all kinds of emotions while you read... it literally has everything: intense love, unrequited love, betrayal, intrigue, and high stakes. I truly believe this story deserves to be the next big Netflix series!😄 ❤️"

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Lovely~

"I’m mad at Oliver but I’m loving the drama~~ amazing style of writing!✍️hope Lilian get her happy ending 🥲🥲"

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A Very compelling story

"This story is genuinely very compelling. One thing I can definitely give the author is that they have a really good imagination. There are so many things happening that I kept wanting to know what would happen next, and that curiosity honestly kept me reading. I did feel like the story could benefit from more development, though. At times, things move a little too quickly, and I felt like some parts were being told rather than shown. There are also quite a lot of short sentences, and I think combining some of them would make the writing flow much better and make the reading experience smoother. I also got a little confused by some of the names and ages in certain parts, so I think a little more clarity there would help. But overall, I think the story has a lot of potential. The imagination behind it is definitely there, and the plot is interesting enough to make you want to keep turning the pages because you genuinely want to find out what happens next. With a bit more editing, slower development of certain scenes, and more showing instead of telling, I think this could be an even stronger story. Definitely an interesting read!"

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Dramatic

"I like the book. Its suspenseful and dramatic. At first it gets confusing, then with more reveal it gets interesting. I like the plots, and I like how the author twisted them. I enjoyed reading it. And as for, some things to look at...there are not many but. It would nice, if the characters are worked on a little more. Character development. And maybe a little more pacing. But overall it doesn't affect the book much. Please do continue writing!"

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Aristocracy 101

"It’s an interesting story! I’m really curious to see how the relationship between the male and female leads develops as the story progresses. Looking forward to reading more! ❤️📖 "

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