The Apsara I Never Understood by spirit2911 at Inkitt
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The Apsara I Never Understood

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Summary

Captivated by her unique grace and innocence, a young man becomes endlessly lost in thought, trying to unravel the mystery of the woman who captured his heart. While the rest of the world sees just another face in the crowd, he wonders if she is a heavenly angel, a celestial nymph, or simply an ordinary girl made extraordinary by his love.

Genre
Poetry
Author
spirit2911
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

I Just Kept Wondering

There was a strange charm in her,

Unlike anyone else I had known.

She stood completely apart from the crowd,

A presence entirely her own.

A quiet simplicity filled her ways,

An innocence lived in her smile.

Was she an angel walking the earth,

Or a celestial nymph staying a while?

I just kept wondering, endlessly lost,

Holding on to every word she’d say.

Was she truly that special and rare,

Or did my eyes just see her that way?

That she was different—yes, that was true,

Yet the mystery remained untouched.

Was she an angel, an apsara from above,

Or just a simple girl I loved so much?

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