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Couldn't Get Enough of Haiku!

"A story about a man named Haiku, who lives in a small village with his family, who doesn't know him fully. Haiku just wanted to live peacefully with his family and bury his past behind him, but his past always seems to find him back. Gotta admit, I'm such a sucker for stoic, powerful MCs, and Haiku? Damn! You think he is just an ordinary farmer? Well think again! He exudes that fatherly aura around his children, and the people he cherish, and this badass aura around the presence of the crown. Writing style needs some minor improvements, such as the italicizing texts rather than placing them in-between two asterisks for internal monologues to elevate the story's readability, as well as replacing "---" hyphens with Inkitt's native line divider. But there was no grammar errors, typos, or sentences that feels off. But even with those minor adjustments needed, the story itself overshadows it, haha. That's how immersive the story was for me. Overall, if you're looking for a story with an MC who's humble, quiet, has a hidden identity, and is secretly a badass, then this story is a MUST READ!"

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