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Carnage Child

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Summary

In a world of deception and betrayal, Maeve's fragmented psyche becomes her greatest weapon. Haunted by a traumatic past, she has created two alter egos: Keres, a ruthless assassin, and Sally, a charming and innocent façade. As she infiltrates the criminal underworld of North Valley, her dual identities threaten to collide. With each step, Maeve's grip on reality falters, and her quest for vengeance against Blackwood, her sister's killer, becomes an all-consuming obsession. Will she find redemption or succumb to the darkness that has defined her existence?

Status
1mo ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1- The Girl with Strange Eyes


Sally tossed and turned in her bed, the hymns drifting from the church next door grating against her nerves. Their cheerfulness felt like an insult — she wanted a dark, stormy morning to match her mood, not this thin, indifferent sunlight.

Her first day at a new school waited for her downstairs, and the thought of it — new faces, new hallways, the whole guessing game of who to trust — sat in her stomach like a stone.

When the church bell struck seven, the singing stopped, and the silence that followed felt too sudden, almost deliberate. Sally swung her legs over the side of the bed and sat there a moment, gathering the nerve to stand.

The dream from last night was still with her — vague now, but its shape lingered, a sense that something had been watching and waiting. She couldn't place it, and that bothered her more than the dream itself.

She stood, and her bare foot came down on a shard of glass. Pain shot up her leg; she bit back a curse. Broken glass. Bad luck, if you believed in that sort of thing — and this morning, she almost did.

The fragments were scattered across the floor, remains of a vase she'd knocked over in the dark the night before. She stared at them a moment too long before she started picking up the pieces, hands not quite steady.

Get up. Get dressed. Get through the day. She repeated it like a rule.

By the time she came out of the bathroom, she'd pulled herself back together — at least on the outside. She was average height, her build somewhere between soft and athletic, her dark brown hair falling past her shoulders in loose waves, a fringe of bangs framing a round face. Her eyes were her strangest feature: one a deep indigo, the other so dark it read as black, a mismatch people always noticed and rarely mentioned out loud.

She smoothed her white blouse, straightened her tie, tugged her skirt into place. The uniform usually felt ordinary. Today it felt like armor. She slung her pink backpack over one shoulder — a small, stubborn flash of her in a school full of strangers — and headed out.

The priest caught her on her way past. "The peace of the Lord be with you."

Normally she'd answer with an easy Amen. Today she only nodded, eyes down, and kept walking.

Mrs. Jenkins, a fixture at the church, had offered to drive her — a kindness Sally couldn't quite relax into. What if the other kids showed up in sleek black cars, and she rolled up in Mrs. Jenkins' battered old taxi? The thought needled at her the whole ride.

Delta High School came into view, its brick front blank and unfriendly, its windows catching the light like watching eyes. Mrs. Jenkins gave her shoulder an encouraging pat that didn't quite land.

"Good luck, dear. You'll do just fine."

Sally stepped out into a scene louder and messier than she'd braced for — backpacks bouncing, kids on skateboards and bikes weaving through the crowd, no sleek cars in sight. Just people. A cluster of especially polished-looking students caught her eye — popular kids, she guessed — and something in her chest loosened, just slightly.

Maybe I'll find my place here.

She found her classroom from yesterday's tour, pushed the door open, and announced herself before she could lose her nerve. "Hi — I'm a transfer student. Sally Hall."

The room went quiet. Every head turned. Curiosity, amusement, a few unreadable stares. Her palms went damp, but she held her ground, and for one strange second the silence didn't feel hostile — it felt like the room was simply waiting to see who she was.

She slid into an empty desk as the teacher, Mrs. Thompson, looked over with a warm, unhurried face.

"How are you doing today?"

No one answered for her. The class just watched, and Sally couldn't tell if she'd missed a joke or if this was simply how the room worked.

Then a boy at the back shot to his feet, grinning. "Ma'am, there's a transfer student!"

"Ah — welcome. And your name, dear?"

Sally stood. "Sally Hall."

"Have you submitted your files to Admissions?"

"Yes, ma'am."

Mrs. Thompson nodded, satisfied. "Good. Get acquainted — they're all nice." She turned and left, and Sally was still puzzling over the brevity of it when three girls peeled off from the crowd and closed in around her.

Legend led them — class president, by the look of her, curls bouncing with each step. Emma, athletic and sharp-eyed, followed. Cassandra — Sandra — brought up the rear, green eyes glittering with something between curiosity and challenge.

"Hi," they said together, pleasant enough, but with an edge underneath that Sally couldn't quite name.

"Oh — hello." She tried to sound easier than she felt.

Legend made the introductions with the practiced charm of someone used to being in charge, and just as quickly, the group turned to go. "See you around, then."

Sally watched them disappear back into the noise, feeling like she'd been assessed and filed away.

She let out a slow breath — she'd survived it — when a voice behind her broke the moment.

"I thought bullying was the last thing on your mind."

She turned. A boy with unruly hair and an easy smile was watching her, amused.

"Relax," he said. "This school doesn't play around with that. One report and you're out — no second chances."

"Thanks for the warning," Sally said, meaning it.

"Raymond. Ray, for short." He offered his hand.

"Sally." His grip was firm, friendly — the first thing all morning that felt uncomplicated.

Ray nodded at the desk beside her. "Fair warning — that one's taken."

"Oh — sorry, I'll move."

"Nah, stay." A flicker of mischief crossed his face. "When the owner shows up, they'll either ask you to move, or they won't."

"...Okay. Thanks, I guess."

He dropped into the seat next to her like they'd known each other for years. "Frankie's the one who outed you as new blood, right?"

"Yeah, that's him."

"Our resident town crier. Knows everyone's business before they do." Ray grinned, and Sally found herself laughing, the knot in her chest easing another notch.

The room settled into its usual morning hum — kids trickling in, some glancing her way, most not. Sally tried to focus on the equations chalked across the board, but her mind kept circling back to Legend's group. Had she said something wrong? Or was that just how they greeted everyone?

Then the room went still.

A boy stood at the back, scanning the space like he was looking for something specific. Sally's eyes caught on him and stayed there — she couldn't have said why. Tall, lean, dark hair pushed back like he hadn't thought about it, a bag slung over one shoulder. He didn't so much enter a room as take inventory of it.

"Who's that?" she whispered to Ray.

"Asher Blackwood," Ray murmured back. "Owner of that desk."

Asher's gaze swept the room and caught on Sally for half a second — no longer — before moving on. It was nothing. It shouldn't have made her pulse jump the way it did.

He crossed the room toward them, and Sally started to rise, ready to give up the seat before there was trouble. Ray's hand on her shoulder stopped her.

"Stay put."

"Hey," she said under her breath, "are you trying to get me in trouble?"

"Relax. I'm not." He patted her shoulder, entirely too pleased with himself. He wanted a show, and it looked like he was about to get one.

Asher stopped in front of them, frowning. Sally made herself meet his eyes and hold them — she'd been through this before, at her old school, over a desk that hadn't been worth the fight it started. She wasn't backing down first this time.

"That's my seat," Asher said.

"Really? Nobody told me." She kept her voice light, even as her pulse ticked up.

He studied her for a second too long, expression unreadable. "I'll sit with Ray instead."

Ray grinned like he'd won something. As Asher walked off, Sally finally let out the breath she'd been holding.

"Thanks," she said. "I owe you."

"Don't mention it. Gotta keep things interesting around here." His wink pulled a genuine smile out of her — the first easy one all morning.

Mrs. Peters swept in a moment later, and the temperature of the room seemed to drop with her. Ray leaned forward.

"Heads up — Mrs. Peters likes to test new students. Don't take it personal."

Sally nodded, throat tight, and tried to focus on the lecture. It didn't last. Mrs. Peters' eyes found her within minutes, narrowing on her name tag.

"Miss Hall. Any guess why I dislike new students joining this close to exams?"

Sally hesitated — then answered anyway. "You think we'll slow the class down. I don't think that's true. New students bring a different angle. That can move things forward instead of back."

Mrs. Peters raised an eyebrow, something between surprise and interest. "I'll hold you to that." A beat. "Two branches of Kingdom Monera. Go."

The name-drop of exams had scattered every other thought from Sally's head — but the answer surfaced anyway. "Phylum Schizophyta — bacteria. Phylum Cyanophyta — blue-green algae."

A ripple went through the room. Ray whooped. "She got it!" — and the class actually applauded, which felt absurd and wonderful in equal measure.

"Welcome to the class, Miss Hall," Mrs. Peters said, something almost like approval in her voice. "You'll fit in fine."

When the bell rang, Sally exhaled — really exhaled, the tightness in her shoulders finally letting go. Ray knuckle-bumped her; a few students threw her quiet thumbs-up on their way out.

Legend watched from across the room, something like respect in her expression.

"You were so cool!" Ray said, grinning.

"I was terrified," Sally admitted. "Thanks for the warning."

"I got you."

Legend drifted over. "Mrs. Peters is probably annoyed you got it right — she didn't even set homework."

"She usually does?"

Emma nodded. "Tough, but fair."

Sandra, quiet until now, glanced toward the back of the room. "Asher, you couldn't even say hi?"

Asher's jaw tightened. "Just because you and Legend broke up doesn't mean you can't have small talk with the rest of us."

"We weren't dating, Sandra," Legend said, flat. "Drop it."

"Can everyone stop talking? I'm trying to study," Asher said, not looking up.

The group's attention swung back to Sally, curious in a way that felt almost proprietary — like she'd passed some test she hadn't known she was taking.

"Ian coming or what?" Emma asked.

Ray smirked. "Why, you miss him?"

Emma flushed. "Can't I?"

"Who's Ian?" Sally asked.

Emma's whole face lit up. "School president. Also — my future boyfriend. Ian West."

The group laughed, and Ray leaned over to murmur, "Good luck with that one, Em."

By the time classes ended for the day, Sally felt lighter than she had all morning — like she'd cleared some invisible hurdle without quite knowing the rules of the game.

As she packed up her bag, Ray studied her for a second. "You're not like the other new kids, you know. You've got spunk. I think you're gonna do fine here."

"Thanks, Ray. That means a lot." She meant it more than she expected to.

They filed out into the hallway with everyone else, lockers slamming, voices overlapping, the air thick with the smell of fresh paint. Sally fell into step beside him, and for the first time since she'd woken up to that too-cheerful hymn, the day didn't feel like something to survive.

Maybe she'd find her place here after all.

She just didn't yet know what it would cost her.

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