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Marvelous in a perverted way
"Marvelous, in a, perverted, sick way (the perversion and sickness comes with the plot). It somehow reminds me of a Marilyn Manson performance - true, grotesque and "in your face". The final phrases are epic and prophetic."
On point.
"This is a very relevant piece of humor. Your Trump is a perfect caricature: did you actually quote him at some points, or just paraphrase? Some of the Trumpisms that were included were perfect, completing the 'over-the-top' effect. And the Jon Stewart cameo. A+. I could go on. The only problem I had was that it could have been a little more subtle, but the heavy-handedness was what you had to do. Trump is not a subtle man. The Epilogue nailed it. Sealed the deal. Perfect end."
