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Fine bedtime fare

"I thoroughly enjoyed this little piece. I was Amused by the sitters ingenuity. The author might come up with a quest for the supporting cast, and continue the narrative and the plot hints. that make this story so charming,"

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Trope Subversion!

"I love good trope subversion. There's nothing quite like it. Please continue! It's really hard to find trope subversion that isn't bending to the tropes, abandoned, awful, or some combination thereof."

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