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Ten Thousand Miles of Life

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Summary

Ten Thousand Miles of Life” explores the fragility and impermanence of life. Through imagery of shriveling lilies and yellowing grass, the poem reflects on how quickly beauty, life, and people can fade. It examines the suddenness of death and the overwhelming grief that follows, especially how memories can continue to haunt someone long after a loss. Rather than presenting grief as something that simply disappears with time, the poem explores how mourning can permanently change a person psychologically and emotionally.

Genre
Poetry
Author
MakaylaB
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Ten Thousand Miles of Life

Ten thousand miles of life—

and somehow, it all becomes vanity.

Lilies shrivel.

Grass turns yellow.

What once bloomed beneath the sun

slowly becomes a memory.

Death comes quickly,

without an alarm,

without knocking,

without giving the heart

time to prepare.

Then grief arrives.

Not gently.

Not slowly.

It crashes into the soul

without warning,

leaving emotions scattered

where peace once lived.

And mourning—

oh, mourning changes you.

Time does not always heal

the way people promise it will.

Sometimes time only teaches you

how to carry the wound.

Because the memories remain.

They haunt the quiet.

They return in familiar places,

in old photographs,

in voices you can almost hear.

You keep living,

but a piece of you

is forever walking backward

through the miles

of what you lost.

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