A compulsive read

"Misspaulina, your story is so compulsive I started to read this morning and haven’t stopped until now. I’m really enjoying how you write, the staccato style pulls you in to keep reading, to not stop until you are finished. However, I think because this is translated from the German (your native tongue I presume), sometimes the sentences don’t always feel complete and so the story loses it’s fluidity. Also there is a sprinkling of German words that haven’t been translated at all throughout the book. Having said that, I am very much looking forward to reading the rest of the book. 😊"