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Stark and Earthy

"This story is dark, full of corruption and the sort of uncaring bite of high finance. How the poorest individuals can fight for their basic rights. Well done! Can't wait for the next chapter!"

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Love the plot building

"The details and plot building are insane, I love how everything is leading towards a proper story"

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