Where They Fall: Origins
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Where They Fall: Origins

This story contains themes of: assault

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Summary

Where They Fall: Origins is a dark, revisionist Western following Marcus Holt, a young man shaped by violence, loss, and a world where justice is often decided by whoever holds the gun. After a devastating event in his childhood leaves him scarred both physically and emotionally, Marcus grows up in the unforgiving American West. As he travels through towns, wilderness, railroads, and settlements ruled by criminals and corruption, he slowly becomes something more than an ordinary gunslinger. Marcus develops his own idea of justice. To him, the world is unbalanced, and those who prey upon the innocent must eventually pay their debts. But the further he travels, the more complicated that belief becomes. Not every enemy is simply evil, not every victim can be saved, and violence rarely ends when the shooting stops. Along his journey, Marcus encounters dangerous outlaws, corrupt lawmen, ruthless killers, and powerful men whose influence reaches far beyond the frontier. He also meets people who challenge the way he sees the world including Silas Crowe, a skilled gunman whose relationship with Marcus gradually becomes one of the most important bonds in his life. Through gunfights, harsh journeys, quiet nights, unexpected friendships, and moments of humanity, Marcus begins to discover that surviving the West may be easier than understanding what it has turned him into.

Genre
Action
Author
The
Status
2mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 Matters Ends

The morning arrived without warning, like mercy pretending to be permanent.


Sunlight spilled across the Holt ranch in slow, golden sheets, touching the fence posts, the grazing horses, the small white house that stood alone against the endless West.


The land was quiet—honestly quiet.


No gunshots.


No shouting.


No omens.


Just wind brushing the grass and the low creak of wood settling into itself.


Inside, seven-year-old Marcus Holt sat at the kitchen table, legs swinging, boots dusty from chasing chickens since dawn.


His mother hummed softly as she poured coffee, the sound warm and careless.


His father leaned against the counter, newspaper in hand, grumbling about men in suits who talked about law while letting bandits run the land.


“They’ll rot before they fix anything,” his father said, shaking his head.


Marcus laughed.


He didn’t understand politics.


He understood safety.


He understood this house.


This table.


This moment.


Then came the knock.


Three slow strikes against the door.


Not rushed.


Not fearful.


Confident.


The humming stopped.


Marcus’s father frowned. “Too early for visitors.”

He crossed the room, hand already near his belt—not from fear, but habit.


The door opened.


The first gunshot tore the morning in half.

Marcus saw his father jerk backward, eyes wide in surprise rather than pain, blood exploding across his chest as if the sun itself had turned against him.


His body slammed into the table, coffee shattering, wood cracking, warmth spilling where warmth should not be.

Marcus screamed.


His mother didn’t even have time to reach him.

Men poured through the doorway like a flood breaking a dam—boots, guns, laughter.


One grabbed her by the hair and yanked her back as she fought, nails tearing skin, voice shredding itself into pleas.


“Please—please—my son—!”


Marcus tried to run.


A hand caught him, iron-strong, lifting him off the ground as if he weighed nothing.


His boots kicked air.


His lungs burned.


His eyes locked onto the man who stepped forward slowly, deliberately, as though he owned the room.


John Garrick.


He didn’t rush.


He never did.


He took in the scene with professional interest—the dead man, the screaming woman, the shaking child. His coat was clean. His boots polished.


His face calm, almost bored, like a man inspecting property he intended to take.


“Well,” Garrick said, glancing at the corpse, “that was messy.”


He nodded once.


A gunshot silenced Marcus’s mother mid-scream.

The sound echoed, then collapsed into a ringing void.

Marcus couldn’t breathe. His body went numb. Something inside him broke—not loudly, not dramatically, but completely.


Garrick knelt in front of him.


“Look at me, boy.”


Marcus tried to close his eyes. Fingers forced them open.

Garrick smiled—not wide, not cruel. Worse. Certain.


“This land remembers violence,” Garrick said, pulling a knife from his belt. The blade caught the light. “And it forgets kindness.”


Marcus shook.


Tears ran freely. He couldn’t speak. Couldn’t scream. Couldn’t even beg.


Garrick leaned closer.


“I want you to remember me.”


Pain detonated across Marcus’s forehead.


The knife cut slow. Deliberate. Deep.


Marcus screamed until his voice died.


A cross was carved into his flesh, blood streaming down into his eyes, blinding him, burning him. Garrick stood and wiped the blade clean on Marcus’s shirt.


“Leave him,” Garrick told his men as they turned to go. “Scars grow louder than graves.”


They left the door open.


Sunlight returned to the room like it didn’t know what had happened.


Marcus fell to the floor beside his parents, blood soaking into the wood, the cross on his forehead pulsing like a second heart.


He lay there until the day faded, until the cold came, until the world felt empty enough to match what remained inside him.


That night, the West took a child.


And in return, it planted something far worse.

Something that would remember.

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