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THE HIDDEN

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Summary

She was lonely. She was invisible. Until she met HER. At Academy, friendship is a luxury and popularity is a weapon. Windsdel thought she finally found a friend in the most popular girl of her batch. What she didn't know was that this girl wasn't Gissel... she was Feny. And Feny was about to change her life forever. Some secrets shouldn't be shared.

Status
25d ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

THE HIDDEN-PART 1

THE HIDDEN-PART 1

They say that when you cannot tell the feelings in your heart to anyone, you should pour them onto paper.

This world never seemed to belong to her. Since childhood, she had been a quiet and intelligent girl, yet there was no one who truly understand her or cared to listen. She was sent to an orphanage and raised in a boarding school.

By nature, she was gentle and reserved, with dusky skin and thick beautiful hair. Having no parents means she had no one she could call her own.

Most of the children bullied her. They mocked her, called her cruel names, beat her and made her life miserable simply because they believed she ugly. But she was only a little girl, trying to understand a world that had never been kind to her.

The children who were beautiful became friends with each other and received all the love and attention, while the others who were orphans and considered ugly, were bullied. For example, they were told to take off their clothes and dance, if they refused, they were beaten like animals. Not only that they were also called by strange and unusual names, had their food taken away from them, and were made to Do their dishes and share of the work as well.

One day, she saw her batchmate being beaten by the leader right in front of her eyes, simply because that had not given her share of biscuits to the leader. The leader then held the wooden comb vertically and hit her hard on the head with its broad side. The poor girl started crying in pain. For her, this was like a warning that no one should ever dare to go against the leader.

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