This is a very imaginative and out-of-the-box idea! I LOVE it!!!

"I honestly can't put everything into words! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the book, the plot is well thought and very exciting! The plot is very emotional, and I think you have captured that perfectly, The first few chapters had me in tears. I honestly felt so bad for her and her dad, they must've been through many losses. The names of the characters and "matters" is extremely creative!! Like the name Angelette, I wouldnt have thought of that! Its so beautiful. The overall vibe of the story makes my stomache tighten, BUT thats a good thing! Your definetly getting the emotion and distortion in "Angelettes" P.O.V (Point Of View) At first we thing she's an innocent girl who doesn't have good living circumstances, and thats kind of correct, but the way she reacts to it is not the favorable option. I feel bad for her father, tho what he did wasn't right either, SELLING HIS DAUGHTERS LAST POSSESSIONS OF HER MOTHERS BELONGINGS FOR YOUR OWN REASONS WASN'T RIGHT!!! -And I emapthize with "Angelette" for that but... Her father obviously cares about her, her works hard for her in the only ways he thinks he can. We can percieve the downfall of his mental state, the "Madness" consuming him. That said, when she starts playing the game, at first we assume the character is one of those naive and uncorrupted MC's where they are there to discover the world and easily charm everyone around... BUT Angelette is practically the opposite once you get to chapters 7-8, The Letter - Your Regection. We witness the severity of her obsession and honestly, Blake may be a merciless bully, but we can't help but slightly agree with him. SHES OBSESSED, But, not the good type, she might actually need help, or some way to turn the obsession into something new? The way she continues to return to him even after regection and humiliation truely isn't healthy... Finally, I AM HERE TO BEG YOU TO KEEP WRITING THIS BECAUSE I CAN'T SLEEP AT NIGHTTTTT!!! I CAN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXTTT (TvT) Help meeeeeeee THIS IS "DESPERATE SANDRE" ALL OVER AGAINNN!!!!! PS: Keep writing, you are very talented, and I'm sure that your writing could help people and be the reason people smile when they are down or bored, just like what it does to me!! <3"