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Dried up flowers, eternal flowers.

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Summary

An ironic allegory between a fast and eternal death against a full life with its disgusting end. Una irónica alegoría entre la rápida y eterna muerte frente a una vida plena con final asquiento. This is a drama about how flowers become eternal ornaments (still life) how they give beauty in their static death, with contrast all around, the beholder contemplates them, but when his life is over, the beholder-creator himself has envy for his own eternal creation, the reason; those flowers are forever beautiful while he is decaying. Un drama de como las flores se vuelven eternos adornos (flores secas), como brindan belleza en su estática muerte, con contrastes a su alrededor, el observador-creador las contempla, pero cuando acaba su vida, el mismo observador siente celos de su eterna creación, al ser estas flores por siempre hermosas mientras él se pudre.

Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

an end to life

You were born to be beautiful

And with the twilight you fell asleep

For ever awake.


Closed were the doors to your souls

And dreams took you

Within poems, to dry paradises.


Only the awakening would be a nightmare

Just the awakening would be a nightmare.


In night´s darkness

Your color is still dim and contrast

Against the shinning and indifferent stars.


Air swings you

Cold caught you

Autumn never came.


Never buried, never among tombs

Never buried, never on tombs.


Cursed for being beautiful

Born to be banished

And in your purest form, dried up remained.


Adorned a party in the shape of bouquet

Adorned my vigil as a funerary bouquet.


Shinning and at the same time dull

I behold you inside a bedroom´s darkness

Shinning and at the same time dead.


Petals will never disintegrated

I behold you even in grief

Dried and fragile giving me light.


Immaculate in the prime of life

Immaculate as the fountain of youth.


Dried and never withered

Dead in your fullest alive shape

Time won´t take you away.


Only the awakening would be a nightmare

Never buried, never on tombs

Adorned my vigil as a funerary bouquet

Immaculate as the fountain of youth.


Oh how I envy you in your eternal death

Subtle and fragile

While my body become disintegrated

Disgusting and decaying before me.


Never buried, never among tombs

Just the awakening would be a nightmare

Immaculate in the prime of life

Adorning my vigil as a funerary bouquet.

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