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The long way down

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Summary

Luke and Casey are just two friends who happen to fall, and fall, and fall infinitely. Or so they believe. After their most recent squabble, Luke and Casey find themselves in a part of local India, specifically Bengaluru (Or Bangalore). How do they get back to their sweet Queens all the way in England? How do they navigate their way?

Genre
Drama
Author
Aisha
Status
2d ago
Chapters
6
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

1-let’s have some fun in Abusement park!

‘WhY iS iT aLwAyS mE, wHo GeTs InTo ThEsE tHiNgS’

*Oh shut up Luke. I cant hear myself slowly losing the will to live’

Casey throws a book at my head. Avoiding the book as it sails behind my head, i turn around to watch it slowly get eaten into the dark abyss that surrounds our little island.

*My only source of good entertainment, gone, because you couldn’t keep your mouth shut’

Theres a beat where i try (emphasis on try) to think of a response

‘Not my fault you couldn’t keep your hands to yourself- AH CASEY THAT HURT’

‘Luke, when someone throws an apple at you, its supposed to hurt’

I slowly turn to face her

‘Why are you talking to me as if you’re an idiot?’

‘Of course im talking to you like an idiot, how else would you understand me?. You know, i read a quote that went “an apple a day can keep anyone away if you through it hard enough”. Wanna test that theory?’

I hurrumph, turning back to making a dolphin out of the abyss

‘You know m’lady, you could be a bit nicer, seeing as im the only source of entertainment you have now’

‘I found another book in my bag, also, if you call me m’lady one more time, i will test that theory without your permission’

‘Aww, well it was fun having power while it lasTEEEDDDDDDDDDDD CASEYYYYYYYYYY HELPPPP’

‘SERIOUSLY LUKE?????? OH SHIT’

Let Aisha know what you thought about this chapter!
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Love this

Funny

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Funny

Spicy

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Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

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Emotional

Profound

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Profound

Heartwarming

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Heartwarming

Shocking

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Shocking

Good Writing

3

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

3

Compelling Plot

Great Character

3

Great Character

Strong Dialog

3

Strong Dialog

author

Nice start, just remember that when people talk you put “ around the text otherwise great job!!

a month
author

I like this already!!!!

5 days

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