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THE GIRL WHO WAS NEVER LOVED

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Summary

In Bellgrave, everyone is born with two names—the first given by their parents, and the second whispered by the person destined to love them. Everyone hears theirs eventually. Everyone except Elara Vale. On the night of her eighteenth birthday, Elara finally accepts that she may be destined to live without love. But that same night, a mysterious voice whispers a name she has never heard before. Lucien. The next morning, a stranger arrives in Bellgrave—a boy with gray eyes who seems to know her far better than he should. Then Elara discovers an ancient painting of herself standing beside Lucien. The painting is three hundred years old. As Elara investigates, she uncovers a terrifying truth: she has lived before, and in every lifetime, Lucien has found her. He remembers every version of her. She remembers none of them. Their lives are trapped in a cycle of love, memory, and goodbye. But when Elara finally remembers everything, she discovers the truth behind the curse—and realizes that breaking it may mean making the one choice neither of them has ever been brave enough to make. Sometimes, loving someone doesn't mean staying. Sometimes, it means letting them go.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Shrimvine
Status
Complete
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter One — The Second Name

In the village of Bellgrave, nobody asked whether you would fall in love.

They asked when you would hear your second name.

Everyone was born with two names.

The first was given by their parents.

The second was whispered by the person whose soul would one day recognize theirs.

Some heard it at five.

Some at fifteen.

Most heard it on their eighteenth birthday.

Elara Vale was eighteen when she stopped waiting.

She stood beneath the ancient bell tower at midnight, surrounded by dozens of candles. Around her, the village gathered silently.

Her mother held her hand.

The priest raised an old silver bell.

“When the bell rings,” he said, “listen carefully.”

Elara closed her eyes.

The bell rang.

Once.

Twice.

Three times.

The sound rolled through the village.

She waited.

Nothing.

No voice.

No name.

Only the wind moving through the trees.

Her mother’s hand tightened around hers.

The priest lowered his head.

“I am sorry, Elara.”

She opened her eyes.

Across the square, an old woman whispered,

“She wasn’t given one.”

Elara heard it.

She pretended she didn’t.

That night, she returned home alone.

She climbed the stairs to her bedroom, changed into her nightclothes, and sat beside the window.

Everyone in Bellgrave believed a person without a second name was destined to remain alone.

Elara had always considered the superstition ridiculous.

Until that night.

She rested her forehead against the cold glass.

Then someone whispered behind her.

“Elian.”

Elara froze.

She turned.

Her bedroom was empty.

The whisper came again.

“Elian.”

Her heart began beating faster.

It wasn’t her name.

It wasn’t anyone’s name she knew.

But somehow...

it felt familiar.

She looked toward the mirror.

For one impossible second, her reflection wasn’t alone.

A boy stood behind her.

Pale.

Dark-haired.

Wearing an old-fashioned black coat.

Elara spun around.

Nothing.

When she looked back at the mirror, the boy was gone.

But written across the fogged glass were five words:

YOU CALLED ME BACK.

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