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Swaha

"Amazing . I love Swarna. Amazing story writing. The literature is depicted very beautifully . "

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Shinchan

"The humor is nice. I think I would like to read more.. especially about the narrator.. she is quite fun to read... It's just one chapter.. but it has piqued my interest. "

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Compelling plot

"very interesting and full of adventures- even misterious. I would love to know what happened between Swarn's mother and Karcy's mother!"

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Go On

"Loved the first two chapters! Karcy makes such an intriguing, sharp-tongued introduction, and the moment the fingerprint scanner reads "Miss Swarna Roy" hit hard, great way to show her discomfort with the new family without over-explaining it. The rooftop scene with Mayur, Karcy, and Taizo was genuinely fun, and the Vice President election/prom setup already has real stakes. Excited to see where the "Golden Lens" title comes into play! 📸"

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