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It's the thought that counts

This story contains themes of: depression

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Story Notes

This isn't just your average romantic story, it's a peek into my world of what life could be if the wrong sets of people make the right sets of choices in the worst kind of way...

Summary

Mayowa is faced with a life changing choice after a series of heart breaking course of events that makes realize that nothing in life is as it seems. Her new encounters will either make or break her as she strives to find new meaning in life.

Status
1mo ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Making My Move

The Lagos afternoon sun hung fixed at its zenith, pouring down heat in relentless waves that thickened with every passing minute, the kind of heat that seemed to have a grudge against the whole city. Mayowa stood beneath the black-and-yellow striped shade of an MTN umbrella outside a fruit vendor's stall, seeking whatever mercy the thin canvas could offer, muttering curses at the sky under her breath. Sweat gathered at her temples and traced a slow line down to her chin, then lower still, soaking into the collar of a white cropped tank top that clung to her skin like a second layer. The fabric pulled taut across her, stretched by curves she'd chosen, today, to stop hiding. A black denim mini-skirt sat high on her thighs, and a pair of white sneakers finished off a look she'd assembled with far more care than usual.

This wasn't how she normally dressed, and she knew it. The men who passed her on the street seemed to know it too — glances that lingered a beat too long, then doubled back for a second look, a third, the occasional grin thrown her way when their eyes caught hers. She let it wash past her without reaction. On an ordinary day, dressed the way she usually dressed, none of them would have spared her a glance; today, uninvited as the attention was, she found a small, bitter satisfaction in it — proof, at least, that the message had landed the way she'd intended. She almost laughed, watching a man glance her way despite the woman walking at his side.

Bola — her best friend — had invited her out to the amusement park that day, with his usual lack of warning. That much was ordinary. What wasn't ordinary was the quiet, stubborn hope she'd carried with her ever since his message came through: that today might be the day she stopped being only his best friend. She'd carried a flame for him for years, tended it carefully, and somehow, through all of it, he had never once seemed to notice it burning.

The attention from strangers wasn't the attention she'd dressed for, but she let herself take some comfort in it regardless — at least it confirmed she wasn't invisible, whatever Bola failed to see.

On a good day, Mayowa was easy to fall for. As a child she'd drawn people to her effortlessly, charmed by nothing more than her playfulness and warmth. As she grew, her looks only sharpened that pull further — dark-skinned, striking, with a smile people liked to say could charm the devil himself. Hardly a week passed without some man trying his luck, and she turned them all away without much thought, always with some easy excuse ready. The truth was simpler than any excuse: her attention had only ever belonged to one person.

Bola had been there before any of that beauty bloomed — present through every awkward stage of growing up, every small victory, every quiet heartbreak, all the way back to their first day in nursery school and through to the end of secondary school. University had pulled them onto different paths when Bola's admission came through a couple of years ahead of hers, but they'd never let the distance sever anything. Their families joked, more than once, that the two of them were bound to end up together eventually — a joke Bola always laughed off easily, and one Mayowa quietly, privately, prayed might turn out true.

"Mayowa?"

His voice pulled her out of her own head. She turned and found him near the park entrance — mid-twenties, a few years older than her, his dark, athletic build visible even through a white short-sleeved anime tee stamped with the Rikudo crest across the back. Sunglasses pushed up into his hair, a grin that shaved years off him without trying, orange shorts, white Nike sneakers. Bola had always kept an eye on trend the way other people kept an eye on the news, and she loved that about him even as she teased him endlessly for never quite outgrowing his otaku phase the way she had.

She greeted him with a smile she couldn't have hidden even if she'd tried, waving as she closed the distance between them.

"I didn't know you were already here — I was about to call you," she said, wrapping her arms around him in a hug that lingered longer than it should have, her body pressed close enough that there was no mistaking the contact.

"I was going to wait, but figured I'd grab the tickets first," Bola said, easing himself out of the embrace after a beat too long. Mayowa didn't let it end there — she kept one arm looped through his, pressing in close enough to make sure the view was impossible to miss, and offered up her most innocent smile. His height worked against him here; there was nowhere for his eyes to go that didn't pass straight through the view she'd arranged.

He held her gaze for a moment too long before his own embarrassment caught up with him, and he looked away fast — though not fast enough. Whatever composure he'd been holding onto slipped visibly, betrayed by more than just the color rising in his face.

"What is it?" Mayowa asked, all faux innocence, watching him squirm with something close to satisfaction. She could tell exactly how badly he wanted the ground to open beneath him. She had no intention of letting it.

"Nothing. You just — look different than usual," he managed.

"You like the new look?" she asked, smile widening.

"It's... fine, I guess," he said, still fighting the urge to glance back down.

Mayowa pressed a hand over her mouth to muffle a laugh at his obvious discomfort, quietly thrilled at how well her effort had paid off. "So where to first?" she asked as they started walking.

"Let's head over there," he said, nodding toward a cotton candy stall. Her whole face lit up at the sight of it — she'd always had a weakness for sweets, and Bola knew it well. He used the distraction to put a little space back between them.

The stand was run by a heavyset man with an unkempt beard, his uniform straining visibly over his stomach, brown-stained teeth flashing into view whenever he smiled — as though he'd sampled far too much of his own product over the years.

"How many for the lovely couple?" he asked, grinning.

"Two, please," Mayowa answered quickly, tightening her grip on Bola's arm before he could think to correct the man.

Bola's eyes drifted past her, scanning the crowd as though searching for someone he already expected to find. "Actually — make that four," he said. Mayowa assumed he meant to get extra for later, but before she could ask, she caught him smiling and waving at a girl approaching from across the path. Confused, her grip slackened just enough for him to slip free, and he crossed to meet her, leaving Mayowa standing alone by the cotton candy stand in a fog of her own confusion.

Their greeting — an embrace that read as anything but casual — lasted a beat too long before he led the girl back toward Mayowa, who was still watching, still frozen.

"Mayowa, meet Chioma — my girlfriend. Chioma, this is Mayowa, my best friend since kindergarten," Bola said, making the introductions with easy warmth, utterly unaware of the ground shifting beneath his oldest friend.

The words landed like a physical blow. Mayowa tried to swallow and found her throat had locked against her. They'd talked about everything over the years — even the collapse of his last relationship, dissected in detail — but never once had this come up. Never a hint.

Standing in front of her was a girl a little older, fair-skinned, her figure enviably put together in a way that made something ugly twist in Mayowa's chest. Chioma stood a shade taller, though not built quite as generously as Mayowa in every regard — her chest modest where Mayowa's was not — but her pale grey contact lenses, the fine line of her nose, and a mouth the color of something expensive gave her a polish Mayowa couldn't quite match, no matter how hard she'd tried that morning. It was enough to make Mayowa acutely, painfully aware of every place she came up short.

She pasted her smile back into place and offered her hand. "Hi, it's nice to meet you," she lied smoothly.

"Nice to meet you too," Chioma replied, warm and entirely sincere, which somehow made it worse.

"Where's Junior?" Bola asked, scanning the crowd.

"Getting me ice cream," Chioma said, then pointed. "Speak of the devil."

Junior arrived a moment later, balancing two large cups — one chocolate, one vanilla. "Hi," he said to Mayowa with an easy grin, handing the chocolate to Chioma. He was, if anything, more conventionally built than Bola, arguably more handsome by most measures — but he lacked whatever quiet certainty Bola carried, the thing that had made him the only one Mayowa ever wanted.

"Hi," she replied, keeping her tone civil with real effort.

"He's Chioma's best friend," Bola added, catching the gap in introductions.

"I'm so sorry for dropping this double-date thing on you both without any warning," Chioma said, wincing a little as the realization caught up with her. "Junior's the one who suggested it, honestly — I just wanted him to meet my boyfriend properly."

"It's okay," Mayowa lied again, the words tasting worse this time, now that she knew the idea had come from Bola himself. She'd genuinely believed, walking in, that today belonged to her. Reality had other plans, and now it was her turn to silently beg the ground to swallow her whole. It didn't listen to her any more than it had listened to Bola.

"Alright, let's go have some fun!" Bola called out, and the group answered with a burst of enthusiasm — everyone except Mayowa, who managed only a stiff smile.

"What about the cotton candy?" the vendor called after them.

"Oh — right, sorry." Bola turned back, already reaching for his wallet. "How much?"

"Four hundred naira," the man said, grinning wide.

Bola paid without argument, collected the candy, and jogged back to rejoin the group.

Behind them, the vendor stood watching the four of them walk away, a grin spreading slowly across his face — too wide, too knowing, entirely too pleased with itself to belong to an ordinary man. For just an instant, his eyes flared a deep, unnatural red, there and gone before anyone could have thought to look back and see it.

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Chapter Notes

Mayowa meet Bola expecting to have him all to herself and reveal her true feelings only to be met with a heart wreaking realization...

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