un amor para toda la vida

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

Shriya: It's a beautiful story with strong characters and a great story line. It's emotionally very engaging from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this.

lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

jonahlee: at first i though it was a historical romance but realized it was a modern novel.I loved it ,great storyline

barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama

caldwtd: A bit of sweet in a world of violence. I enjoyed this story, and angst of each character believing they should not have these feelings towards each other. I did struggle with her seeming to be a bad ass, but yet was always so negative about herself, her negativity was a bit too much for my liking, I...

Isarah: I can't stop smiling, though! It's so sweet, so good, and I absolutely love it! Thank you, author! ❤️

Read4Free16: Heartwarming