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Part of me faded

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Summary

There are so many memories of my life I want to share a part of it in this one.

Genre
Drama
Author
Guest5656
Status
9d ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Our first interaction

I remember I was 6 years old at that time when I first met him.He was like a beam of light in the dark that surrounded me.When I first met him, it was in my school bus.We both were going to same school with same friends and same transport. He has green shiny eyes that would look in your soul, a tiny smirk that always tugged at the corner of his lips, and brown hairs that covered his forehead a little.His name was Max.

We were on our way to school:

Max:" Nahhh you can never be my crush, you are a fat giraffe.

Me:" And you're a toddler's snot."

We were busy arguing and fighting with each other while the friends behind us snickered and shipped us both multiple times a min. We were like a couple in their head.

I vividly remember that every interaction I had with Max was about roasting each other.....until one day:

Me:" NOOOOO THIS HAS TO BE A DREAM.HOW IS HE HERE????????"

I screamed at top of my lungs when I saw him at my cousin's wedding.It was like seeing a fruit on an infertile tree.

Max:" Omgggggg you stalked me here too, you cockroach killer!!!!!"

Hearing our screams my mom came in there and only then I got to knew he's my distant relative.

I was wearing a white long gown and busy devouring my cookies when I saw him entering the room with a brown coat and dress pants and a cute little red bow tucked in his pocket.That is when I started to realise maybe i liked him.....but that was just the beginning of my never fulfilled first love.

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