What is your opinion?
Who's there...eDNA
"eDNA is so plausible, so possible. What a great idea. How do you deal with a life force that asks to be but already is. Something that can control the world has already infiltrated and the power struggles that would create between nations. Love it! Bring on the rest."
Author Rod Imer
"Part two is on the way ! eDNA wants to stop the current wars by stopping all computer based activity. This leaves the opponents with a distinct advantage !! How do we get over that ??? AUTHOR Rod Imer Good question. We have to go back to bows and arrows ??? signed by Aro Dee"
Good outline
"Assuming this is only the synopsis of a longer story: I think this would be a very good story. For some reason to me it has a distinct Ender's Game feel to it. The idea of the eDNA is interesting and a little scary. There were bits that I didn't quite understand, but there is only so much information that you can pack into an outline. The ending was quite chilling, unexpected. I enjoyed this a lot. The reason I marked it down was because in some places your sentences were so long and complex that I had a hard time reading them. Sometimes shorter sentences can be used just as well. All in all, good work! And good luck in the contest!"
