An interesting idea.

"Honestly, after the first chapter, I can't quite say yet whether I like your story or not. The concept itself is actually very interesting—I’m a fan of themes like this. I’m really curious to see how the story develops and how it eventually ends. I’d recommend this story to anyone who enjoys mysteries and tales about rebuilding one’s life. I gave this rating because I assume you’re just starting out on your writing journey—and I know what that’s like—so things will get better with time ^_^"