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The Love I Didn’t See

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Summary

𝔼𝕝𝕚𝕫𝕒: When my best friends Clover and Mateo started dating. I felt like everything was changing, and I know, as their best friend, I should be happy for them. After all, they have always been the closest people to me. But there is a problem: I've been in love with Mateo ever since middle school. I've never been brave enough to tell him. It was hard to be happy for them. But now that they are together, I have to find my own happiness; my first love ended before it even started. Now it's time for something new, something greater, with the person I least expected. 𝔸𝕝𝕖𝕔: Eliza is the girl I can't stop thinking about. And I know she's the one for me, but she doesn't. I've loved her since the moment I met her. Every time she laughs, every time she smiles, I feel myself falling deeper. She is breathtakingly beautiful. I love everything about her. I've watched her hide her feelings for Mateo for years. So I knew I didn't have a chance. But now, with Mateo and Clover together, maybe I'll finally have the chance to get closer to her. . I'll show her all that we can be together. And when the time is right, when Eliza is ready to see it, I'll be there. Because I know, deep down, she's the one for me, and no matter how long it takes, I'll be the one for her.

Status
22 mins ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Character Profile


Name: Eliza

Age: 17

Born: February 20, 2007

Family: Mom (Columbian), Dad, (Nigerian), 1 little brother

Origins: Black, Columbian, Nigerian

Pets: Chameleon and Fish

Sign: Pisces

Fav Color: 𝚂𝚊𝚐𝚎 𝙶𝚛𝚎𝚎𝚗🪷

Appearance: Hazel eyes, brown hair, 3c hair type, 5’6(ft’in), freckles, multiple ear piercings, nostril piercing

Sexuality: Straight

Fav Songs: Genesis by Raye, Fue Mejor by Kali Uchis & SZA, Computer Luv by Ravyn Lenae, Fool For You by Snoh Aalegra

Fav Show: Good Girls

Car: Silver Jeep Renegade

Name: Alec

Age: 18

Born: October 22, 2006

Family: Mom (Filipino) and 1 older sister

Origins: Asian, Filipino, Italian (Dad)

Pets: Yorkie

Sign: Libra

Fav Color: 𝙱𝚕𝚊𝚌𝚔🎶

Appearance: Brown eyes, black hair,

straight hair, 6’0(ft’in), tattoos on arms and back, ear piercings

Sexuality: Straight

Fav Songs: Terracotta Walls by Ash Leone, Distance by Yebba, Day Dream by Destin Conrad, An Eater by Matt Martians

Fav Show: Breaking Bad

Car: Black Chevrolet Truck


Name: Mika

Age: 18

Born: November 30, 2006

Family: 2 Dads, 2 little sister, twin brother

Origins: African American, Dominican

Pets: Bunny and Cat

Sign: Sagittarius

Fav Color: 𝙿𝚞𝚛𝚙𝚕𝚎 💜

Appearance: Brown eyes, black hair, locs,

5’5(ft’in), mole on the right side of nose, belly, ear, and nose piercings

Sexuality: Pansexual

Fav Songs: Nothing Even Matters by Lauren Hill, Girl Get Up by Doechii, To Summer, From Cole by Summer Walker & J. Cole, butterflies. by Brent Faiyaz

Fav Show: Gen V

Car: Purple 4 door Jeep Wrangler

Name: Clover

Age: 17

Born: October 27, 2007

Family: Mom, 1 older brother, 1 little brother

Origins: White, American

Pets: Cat

Sign: Scorpio

Fav Color: 𝙾𝚛𝚊𝚗𝚐𝚎 🧡

Appearance: Green eyes, red hair, wavy hair, 5’4(ft’in), multiple ear piercings

Sexuality: Straight

Fav Songs: Cry Your Heart Out by Adele, Dirty Laundry by The Army The Navy, Couldn’t Make It Any Harder To Love Me by Sabrina Carpenter,

Fav Show: Heartbreak High


Name: Mateo

Age: 18

Born: May 14, 2006

Family: Dad, 2 little sisters

Origins: African American

Sign: Taurus

Fav Color: 𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚎💙

Appearance: Brown eyes, black hair, short hair in waves, 6’1(ft’in), very minimal facial hair, nose and ear piercings

Sexuality: Bisexual

Fav Song: Ciao! by Bryson Tiller, All I Want Is You by Miguel, Garage Rooftop by Q, Maria Maria by Santana

Fav Show: Bloodhounds

Car: White Subaru Outback


Name: Kirin

Age: 21

Born: July 26, 2003

Family: Mom (Filipino) and 1 little brother

Sign: Leo

Fav Color: 𝚁𝚎𝚍💋

Appearance: Brown eyes, black hair, straight hair, 5’3(ft’in), tattoos on sides and back, belly and ear piercings

Sexuality: Straight

Fav Songs: Sad Girlz Luv Money by Amaarae, ballerina by Amelia Moore, Lunch by Billie Eilish, Losing You by Chloe George

Fav Show: Vampire Diaries


Name: Luka

Age: 17

Born: August 5, 2007

Family: Mom, Dad, Only Child

Origins: White

Pets: Golden Retriever

Sign: Leo

Fav Color: 𝚃𝚞𝚛𝚚𝚞𝚘𝚒𝚜𝚎 💎

Appearance: Blue eyes, blond hair, wavy hair, 6’1(ft’in), ear piercings

Sexuality: Demisexual


Name: Malakai

Age: 18

Born: November 30

Family: 2 Dads, 2 little sister, twin brother

Origins: African American, Dominican

Sign: Sagittarius

Fav Color: 𝙶𝚛𝚎𝚎𝚗 💚

Appearance: Brown eyes, black hair, locs, 5’10(ft’in), nose, ear, and eyebrow piercing, eyebrow slit, noticeable birthmark on his left side

Sexuality: Bisexual

Fav Songs: Pyramids by Frank Ocean, Forgiveless by SZA, Channel by Frank Ocean, Stressed by Doechii

Fav Show: The Walking Dead

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