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THE UNFINISHED PEOPLE

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Summary

The dead leave unfinished things behind. Words never delivered. Promises never kept. Choices that can no longer be undone. One day, Yoon Taekyung begins receiving requests from people who are already dead. At first, each request seems isolated—one final message, one unresolved promise, one truth left buried. But as Taekyung begins completing what the dead could not, he discovers that the cases are not as unrelated as they appear. Each unfinished life leads quietly toward another. And eventually, toward something Taekyung himself has never been able to finish. A speculative mystery about death, regret, connection, and the things the living postpone until it is too late. What must we finish before we die?

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3h ago
Chapters
45
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1. The Dead Man’s Request


The hours were still posted on the dry cleaner’s door.

Weekdays, 9:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m.Saturdays, until 6:00.Closed Sundays.

Beneath the small sign, a single sheet of white paper had been fixed to the glass with clear tape.

THIS SATURDAY WILL BE OUR LAST DAY OF BUSINESS.THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING.

Yoon Taekyung looked at the final sentence for a moment. kim

People tended to leave behind the same kinds of words when they were going away. Gratitude they had never expressed. Apologies they had kept postponing. Things that could always be said later while there was still a later suddenly became important once there wasn’t.

Beyond the glass, Samil Cleaners was already half dismantled. Most of the hangers behind the counter were empty. Only a few shirts and pairs of trousers remained beneath clear plastic covers. Sealed cardboard boxes sat on the floor, and one of the two rows of fluorescent lights in the ceiling had been turned off.

“This is the place, right?”

Lee Junseo stood a step behind him.

Taekyung checked the address on his phone, then the sign above the door.

Samil Cleaners.

“Yeah.”

Junseo stepped forward and pulled the handle.

Locked.

“Looks closed.”

“It says they’re open through this week.”

“No. I mean right now.”

Taekyung checked the time at the top of his screen.

3:12 p.m.

“Someone’s inside.”

Junseo tilted his head slightly but said nothing.

Taekyung reopened the request.

Requester: Kim Youngsu.Male.Seventy-one.

Death verification had been completed five days earlier at 6:17 a.m. The posthumous request had activated three minutes later, at 6:20.

The identity registration Youngsu had filed while alive was valid. So was the recorded video verification. Legal review had been approved automatically.

Deadline: 6:00 p.m. today.

The request itself was short.

Before Samil Cleaners closes, please open the second drawer on the right side of the counter.

That was all.

Junseo leaned over Taekyung’s shoulder and stared at the screen.

“That’s really it?”

“Yeah.”

“Opening a drawer counts as a posthumous request?”

“He registered it that way.”

“It doesn’t say what’s inside?”

“No.”

“And after we open it?”

Taekyung closed the screen.

“We’ll find out.”

Junseo made the same face he always did when a request like this came in.

He had been at the center for more than two years now, but part of him still believed that if a person was allowed one last request before death, it should be something important.

A letter never delivered to family.

Hidden money.

A secret buried for decades.

An apology.

Something worthy of words like last wish.

Taekyung knew that expression well.

He had worn it too, when he first started.

It had taken more than eleven years and hundreds of posthumous requests for him to understand that people facing death did not always think about grand secrets.

One man had asked them to return a book he had borrowed ten years earlier.

Another had left instructions not to throw away the dumplings in the second drawer of his freezer but to take them to the old woman next door.

A man who had spent his life fighting with his family had used his final request to insist that no one change the brand of cat food after he died.

Things that mattered while you were alive did not become different simply because you were about to die.

Something scraped against the floor inside the shop.

A moment later, a narrow door behind the counter opened and a middle-aged woman appeared carrying two black plastic bags. She stopped when she saw the two men outside. When Taekyung raised his phone and showed the official ID screen, she approached carefully.

“We’re from the Posthumous Request Center.”

Her eyes moved from the phone to Taekyung’s face.

“Is this about my father?”

“Are you a family member of Kim Youngsu?”

“I’m his daughter. Kim Mijeong.”

Taekyung showed his identification and work credentials.

Only after checking both men again did Mijeong unlock the door.

As the glass door opened, the smell trapped inside the shop drifted out slowly: detergent, old fabric, hot metal from a steam iron, and beneath all of it a faint trace of dust and wood.

Taekyung entered first. Junseo followed.

Mijeong locked the door again behind them.

“The funeral only ended two days ago, and there’s still more.”

Taekyung stopped.

“Were there other requests?”

“No. That’s not what I meant.”

She set the plastic bags down beside a box and gave a short, tired laugh.

“Hospital bills. The funeral. Sorting my father’s things. Now clearing out the shop. Things just keep turning up. I thought when someone died, that was the end of it. But somehow there’s more to do after they’re gone.”

Junseo glanced at her without meaning to.

Taekyung looked toward the counter.

“Ending takes time.”

Mijeong studied him.

“You’ve done this a long time.”

“A while.”

“Is that why you can say things like that so casually?”

Taekyung thought about it but did not answer.

He had not said it because he felt nothing.

He had said it because he had seen it too often.

A person could die in a few seconds.

Disappearing completely from the world took much longer.

Hospital records remained. Insurance remained. Automatic payments kept leaving bank accounts. Food bought only days earlier sat in refrigerators.

Phones remained under contract. Borrowed things stayed unreturned.

Sometimes a minor promise nobody had considered important outlived the person who made it.

And every once in a while, a request remained.

Taekyung stopped in front of the counter.

Three old wooden drawers were built into the right side.

“The second one, right?” Junseo asked.

Taekyung nodded.

Mijeong spoke from behind them.

“I already went through those. There shouldn’t be anything except my father’s ledgers and receipts.”

Taekyung put his hand on the second drawer.

“We’ll open it anyway.”

“Do you have to?”

He turned.

She did not look offended. She looked genuinely curious.

Junseo was watching him with almost the same expression.

Taekyung looked back at the drawer.

“Yes.”

Then, after a beat:

“It was the request.”

The drawer opened slowly.

At first, Mijeong appeared to be right.

Credit-card receipts bound with a yellow rubber band. Laundry claim tickets. A calculator manual. An old stamp pad nearly dry of ink. Several pens. Beneath them, a few folded repair receipts.

Junseo looked into the drawer, then at Taekyung.

“Is that it?”

Taekyung did not answer.

He began taking out the receipts one by one.

Most were old jobs long since completed.

Trouser hems.A coat button replaced.A zipper repaired.A stain removed.

Dates and names had been written by hand. A red stamp marked each slip, and items that had been collected carried a small check.

Taekyung’s hand stopped.

One receipt at the very bottom had no check.

Dark gray men’s winter coat.

Received: November 12, eight years earlier.

Name: Choi Sangho.

A phone number was written below, but two of the last four digits had bled into the paper.

Taekyung showed the receipt to Mijeong.

“Is this coat still here?”

“What coat?”

She narrowed her eyes and read the slip.

“If it was eight years ago, I wouldn’t know. My father probably threw it out. He said unclaimed clothes got cleared after a few years.”

Taekyung looked toward the hanging racks behind the counter.

“Can we check before you finish clearing the shop?”

“I’m boxing everything up anyway. Go ahead.”

Junseo lowered his voice.

“You don’t think the request was to find that coat, do you?”

Taekyung said nothing.

There was a narrow storage room in the back.

Out-of-season clothing and items no one had collected in years hung packed together beneath plastic. Others had been folded into dusty boxes.

The three of them searched for several minutes.

Then Junseo’s voice came from the far side of the room.

“Senior.”

Taekyung turned.

Junseo lifted an old plastic garment cover.

Inside was a dark gray men’s coat.

The cuffs were worn, but the coat itself was surprisingly clean. An old paper tag had been fastened near the chest with a safety pin.

Choi Sangho.

Mijeong stared at it.

“Why would my father still have that?”

Taekyung checked the inside pockets.

Empty.

The buttons were ordinary. There was no sign of anything hidden in the lining.

Junseo frowned.

“So do we return it to the owner?”

Taekyung opened the request again.

Before Samil Cleaners closes, please open the second drawer on the right side of the counter.

Nothing followed.

Youngsu had not asked them to return a coat.

He had only asked them to open a drawer.

Taekyung photographed the phone number on the receipt and sent it through the center’s lookup system.

A few seconds later, a result appeared on Junseo’s terminal.

“Choi Sangho. Seventy-six. His registered address is about fifteen minutes from here by bus.”

Mijeong looked surprised.

“He’s alive?”

“According to the registry.”

“He left a coat here for eight years?”

Taekyung removed the hanger from the rack, plastic cover and all.

“We’ll know when we ask him.”

Choi Sangho lived four bus stops away in an old five-story apartment building with no elevator.

Third floor.

Two small flowerpots sat outside his door.

They rang the bell.

It took a while before the door opened.

An elderly man with white hair and glasses looked at them.

Taekyung introduced himself, then showed him the coat.

Sangho’s expression changed by degrees.

“Where did you find this?”

“At Samil Cleaners.”

Through the plastic, Sangho touched one sleeve.

For a while, he said nothing.

“You remember it?” Taekyung asked.

“Of course.”

Sangho opened the door wider and invited them inside.

The living room held an old bookcase and a small television. Medication packets were arranged neatly at one end of the dining table.

Sangho took the coat, laid it on the sofa, and removed the plastic.

“I left it there eight years ago.”

Junseo asked, “Then why didn’t you pick it up?”

Sangho slowly smoothed the collar.

“I did go back for it.”

“And?”

“I made it as far as the front of the shop.”

Taekyung did not hurry him.

After a long pause, Sangho continued.

“My wife bought me this coat. For our thirtieth anniversary.”

On a cabinet at the far side of the room stood a photograph of a woman.

“She died that winter. About a month after the funeral, I went to pick this up. But when I reached the cleaner’s…”

His hand stopped on the collar.

“I couldn’t go inside.”

Junseo said nothing.

Sangho looked down at the coat.

“If I brought it home, it felt like that would make it real. Like that would mean everything was actually over.”

No one asked another question.

After a moment, Sangho gave a faint smile.

“I forgot about it eventually.”

His fingers rested on the fabric.

“But that man never threw it away.”

Taekyung asked, “Were you close with Mr. Kim?”

“No. Not at all. We’d say hello when I brought something in. That was it.”

Sangho smoothed one crease with the palm of his hand.

“He kept it all this time.”

Taekyung let the silence remain.

After a while, Sangho looked up.

“What happened to Mr. Kim?”

“He died five days ago.”

Sangho’s hand stopped.

“I see.”

For a time, no one spoke.

A car passed outside.

A small clock on the wall ticked forward, one second at a time.

Then Sangho said quietly,

“I never even thanked him.”

Taekyung looked at him.

“We can add a note to the completion record.”

Sangho raised his head.

“For a dead man?”

“It won’t be delivered to him. But it will remain in the final record.”

Sangho thought about that, then nodded.

“Then write one thing for me.”

Taekyung opened the terminal.

Sangho looked at the coat across his knees.

“Tell him I got it.”

He paused.

“And that this time, I won’t forget it.”

Taekyung entered the words exactly as spoken.

When they returned to the cleaner’s, Mijeong was sealing the last cardboard box with tape.

Taekyung opened Kim Youngsu’s request and entered the result.

Second drawer on the right side of counter inspected.Unclaimed repaired item identified.Item returned to owner, Choi Sangho.

Below that, he attached the recipient note.

I received it.This time, I won’t forget.

Mijeong read the screen for a long time.

“Do you think my father remembered the coat?”

“Probably.”

“Then why not just write, Return the coat?”

Junseo nodded.

“I was wondering the same thing.”

Taekyung closed the second drawer.

“He may not have known for certain whether the coat was still here when he registered the request.”

Mijeong nodded slowly.

Maybe that was the answer.

Maybe it wasn’t.

Kim Youngsu was dead. No one could ask why he had phrased the request exactly the way he had.

One thing Taekyung had learned in this job was that completing a posthumous request and completely understanding the dead person were not the same thing.

There were moments when someone had to decide how much of the meaning belonged to the requester and how much had been created by the living people left to interpret the words.

There was not always a perfect answer.

But someone still had to press Complete.

Taekyung touched the button at the bottom of the screen.

REQUEST COMPLETED.

Mijeong looked at the display.

“So is it really over now?”

Taekyung thought for a moment.

“This request is.”

He slipped the phone into his pocket.

Mijeong did not ask what he meant.

When Taekyung and Junseo stepped outside, the afternoon light had begun to tilt.

Through the glass, Mijeong was moving boxes again. The closing notice still hung above her.

THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING.

As they walked, Junseo said, “Senior.”

“What?”

“Honestly, when we opened that drawer, I was disappointed.”

Taekyung kept walking.

“Why?”

“I thought there’d be something in it. A letter, maybe.”

“There was.”

“The receipt?”

“Yeah.”

Junseo laughed.

“That counts?”

Taekyung stopped at the crosswalk.

The light was red.

“What a person leaves behind doesn’t have to be words.”

Junseo said nothing.

A moment later, the signal changed.

They crossed with the crowd as the city moved toward rush hour.

The Posthumous Request Center occupied the eleventh floor of an aging office building downtown.

People who heard the name often imagined somewhere solemn, a place that should feel permanently close to death.

In reality, it looked much like any other office.

A monthly completion rate was displayed on the meeting-room wall. Someone had left half a salad and two cans of sparkling water in the break-room refrigerator. A delivery box waited beside the entrance for whoever had ordered it.

People who worked with the dead still got hungry when lunch ran late.

They still checked the time when meetings dragged on.

They still talked a little more on Friday afternoons than they did on Mondays.

When Taekyung returned to his desk, Oh Jihye asked without looking away from her monitor,

“Samil Cleaners done?”

“Done.”

“What was it?”

Junseo answered before Taekyung could.

“An eight-year-old coat.”

Jihye finally looked up.

“Eight years?”

“Yeah. I was hoping for something like a secret safe. We got one coat.”

Taekyung sat down.

“Since when do you expect safes from posthumous requests?”

“Shouldn’t there be at least a little drama?”

Jihye laughed.

“Lee Junseo, you just haven’t been in this business long enough.”

Junseo headed back to his desk.

“I intend to remain someone who hasn’t been in this business long enough.”

Taekyung turned on his computer.

The completed request had already synchronized with the server.

Kim Youngsu / Completed.

Taekyung added one final note.

Item returned to recipient. No further action required.

Save.

On the right side of the screen, the remaining requests for the day were listed by deadline.

Two property deliveries.One confirmation of a video-message opening.One request on hold because the recipient had refused contact.One legal-review resubmission.

Taekyung was about to open the first one.

A small notification appeared in the lower-right corner.

A NEW POSTHUMOUS REQUEST HAS BEEN ACTIVATED.

He saw that message several times a day.

Without thinking much of it, Taekyung clicked.

A new window opened.

The request number appeared first.

Then identity verification and security classification.

Verification status: Valid.Registration status: Active.Assigned handler: Yoon Taekyung.

Nothing strange so far.

His eyes moved to the next line.

Recipient: Yoon Taekyung.

The hand on his mouse stopped.

There was nothing impossible about being named as the recipient of a posthumous request. After long enough in this line of work, there were clients who designated the person handling the case directly. Someone he had known personally could also have entered his name.

The problem was the line below it.

Taekyung lowered his gaze.

Requester: Yoon Taekyung.

Somewhere behind him, a copier started running.

A conference-room door opened farther down the hall, followed by the sound of people coming out.

A messenger notification chimed once at Junseo’s desk.

Jihye was still looking at her monitor.

Everything was exactly the same as it had been a moment ago.

Everything except Taekyung’s screen.

He stared at his own name.

Requester — Yoon Taekyung.

— END OF EPISODE 1 —

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Your story genuinely caught my attention! 🖤 The whole idea of unfinished promises, hidden emotions, and the mysterious requests from the dead feels so unique and beautifully written. That ending especially made me NEED to know what happens next! 👀✨

Btw, are you from South Korea? 🇰🇷 I’m asking because I absolutely love Korean stories and concepts! My own novel, The Last Chapter, also has a South Korean concept and setting. 🖤🥀 If you’re interested, I’d genuinely love for you to give it a read too. Maybe we can support each other as writers! ✨

Keep writing—you’ve created something really memorable here! 🤍

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Aww, thank you so much for your lovely reply! 🥹🇰🇷 It honestly made me so happy to know that you’re from South Korea, and it means a lot that you’re willing to check out The Last Chapter. Your words really encouraged me as a new writer. 🥺✨ I’m also so happy to connect with a writer from Korea! I’ll definitely keep supporting your writing too. Let’s keep writing, dreaming, and inspiring each other! 💗✨ Thank you again! 🫶🏻

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I really like where you're taking this!

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