Cinny

"The protagonist is quite compelling. She ain't the 'i will argue and fight for my rights' person. In typical rich boy x poor girl stories, from what i have read till now. She will mind her business at first place, i like that. The teacher's comment on project seemed real. They always find something to downgrade the points. And our hero doesn't seem like the typical rich boy until now to me. Maybe because he hasn't done anything yet. But i thought there might be a great fight at start of third chapter because of how second added. It's good it didn't. Cause it's always gets cliche. When the protagonists meet and insult each other at first meet. So, so far I think it's quite great. Keep it up. "