THE LAST BREATH

Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

kenshop: Just love these two and the love that develops between them. There are some bumps along the way. In the end it works out great.

Caspian Gray: Hello everyone!I'm Caspian Gray, a writer who focuses on deep, character-driven emotional dramas. I'm currently looking for trial readers for my new short drama, "Love of the Introvert."It's a story of...

lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!

Karen Nagy: This is a wonderful story with warm, endearing characters. It shows growth and acceptance of individual differences combined to make a strong unit. Loved the characters and enjoyed the writing style. Can't wait to read more!

barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama

Sherry: It was extremely upsetting that we thought we could finish this book on this site. No! You had us go to a different site, which cost, for us to finish the book. I will not be reading any future books written by you. I do not appreciate the deception.

Karen Nagy: The story of an intelligent woman and a strong wolf. Combining powers of the mind and body to the benefit of their pack. Love and respect are proven to be valuable commodities. Looking forward to reading more, well done.