Episode 1: The Extra Incision
Cast of Characters
●Kavya Reddy, 29 — senior staff nurse, ICU & Nephrology ward, Navjeevan Multispecialty Hospital, Pune
●Arjun Reddy, 24 — Kavya’s younger brother, on dialysis, newly listed for a kidney transplant
●Dr. Ashok Verma — senior transplant surgeon, Kavya’s mentor since she joined the hospital
●Rohit Malhotra — lab technician, Kavya’s closest colleague
●Rekha — a former hospital records clerk, fired eight months ago
●Suresh Oberoi — Administrator/CEO of Navjeevan Hospital
●“Bhandari” — a broker who visits the ward under the cover of “medical tourism consulting”
●Lakshmi Reddy — Kavya and Arjun’s late mother, died of “kidney failure” nine years ago
Kavya Reddy had worked four hundred night shifts without ever once losing a patient she was directly responsible for. She kept the number in her head the way other people kept anniversaries — not out of pride, exactly, more like a promise she renewed every time she clocked in. Ward 4B, ICU step-down, eleven p.m. to seven a.m. Vitals, charts, the particular hush of a hospital at 3 a.m. when even the machines seemed to breathe quieter.
She liked the night shift. Nobody had ever believed her when she said that, but it was true. Days belonged to families crowding the corridors, doctors doing rounds in packs, the whole building performing itself for visiting hours. Nights belonged to the patients and the people actually taking care of them, and Kavya had built a whole life around being good at exactly that.
She’d chosen nursing the year her mother died, at seventeen, in a government hospital corridor where nobody had explained anything to her fast enough for it to matter. Kidney failure, the doctors had said, the way doctors said things when they had forty other families waiting and only a few sentences to spare for each one. Kavya had promised herself, somewhere in that corridor, that she would never be the kind of person who let a family stand around not understanding what was happening to someone they loved. Twelve years later, she still checked on unclaimed patients twice as often as her rounds required, because somebody’s daughter had once needed someone to do exactly that and there hadn’t been anyone available.
Bed 14 was an easy one, on paper. Baburao Ghadge, sixty-one, admitted two days earlier for a routine gallbladder removal — laparoscopic, in and out, the kind of case junior residents did in their sleep. No family listed on his intake form, which wasn’t unusual; Navjeevan took in a fair number of patients who came through a municipal referral scheme, men and women with nobody to sit in the corridor for them. Kavya had made a point, the last two nights, of sitting with him herself during her rounds for a few extra minutes. Somebody should.
At 2:40 a.m. his monitor alarm went off, and by 2:52 he was gone. Cardiac arrest, the resident wrote, matter-of-fact, the kind of thing that happened to a man his age with his history even after a clean procedure. Nobody in the room seemed surprised. The resident signed off within minutes, already halfway to the next bed, and the ward boy started wheeling the crash cart back into position like the whole thing was already filed away and forgotten.
Kavya wasn’t surprised either, not at first. She’d seen enough deaths on this ward to know that some bodies simply gave out, quietly and without drama, no matter what the surgery had or hadn’t involved. It was only when she stayed behind to help prepare the body for the mortuary trolley — a small courtesy she extended to every patient without family, because somebody should be the one to do it with care instead of speed — that anything about the night stopped feeling ordinary. She pulled back the gown to check the surgical dressing one last time, the way she always did, out of habit more than necessity.
The gallbladder incision was exactly where it should be, four small laparoscopic ports, healing clean.
There was a second incision she hadn’t documented, hadn’t seen on any chart, hadn’t assisted with. Lower abdomen, left flank, six inches, stitched with a different suture technique than the surgical team on record ever used — tighter, faster, the kind of closure you did when you needed a patient off the table quickly rather than beautifully.
She stood there long enough that the ward boy asked if she was all right.
“You’ve gone white, Sister,” he said, pausing with the trolley half-turned. “Is something wrong with the body?”
“I’m fine, Ganesh. Go ahead and inform the mortuary, I’ll finish up here.” She waited until he’d wheeled the trolley out before she let herself crouch back down and look again, running her gloved thumb lightly along the edge of the second incision the way she might check any healing wound — except this one wasn’t healing, it was fresh, no more than a day or two old, tucked low enough on the flank that it would have been easy to miss under a standard dressing check if you weren’t specifically looking.
She went back to the nurses’ station and pulled Baburao Ghadge’s full chart on the terminal, every note, every order, every signature, looking for anything that explained a second surgical site on a man admitted for his gallbladder. There was nothing. No consult note, no OT booking, no anesthesia record for a second procedure, no radiology order that might have justified an exploratory incision. As far as the hospital’s own paperwork was concerned, that incision did not exist. She scrolled back through his admission photographs, taken as routine practice on intake, and confirmed what some part of her had already known: the flank had been clean and unmarked the day he’d come in.
She told herself there could be an explanation. A transfer note that hadn’t been scanned yet. A procedure done at his previous hospital before referral. She was reaching, and she knew she was reaching, and she kept reaching anyway because the alternative was worse.
At 4 a.m., on a hunch she didn’t examine too closely, she pulled up the ward’s death and discharge register for the past month. It took her forty minutes, cross-referencing patient IDs against admission reasons, and by the time she was done her hands had gone cold in a way that had nothing to do with the AC.
Three other patients. All admitted under the same municipal referral scheme. All with no family listed. All discharged as “deceased — natural causes” within seventy-two hours of a minor, unrelated procedure. All released to the mortuary and cleared for cremation without a single request for autopsy, because nobody had been there to ask for one.
The first was a woman named Sunanda, admitted for a hernia repair, dead of a supposed pulmonary embolism nineteen days ago. The second was a laborer in his forties, brought in after a construction site fall, treated for a fractured wrist and dead within two days of a stroke nobody had flagged him as at risk for. The third was younger, barely thirty, admitted for appendicitis and gone within a single night, cause of death simply listed as “cardiac event, unexplained.” None of the three had a next of kin’s signature anywhere in their files. None of their case notes mentioned anything about organ donation, consent forms, or tissue retrieval — and yet Kavya now found herself unable to look at that absence as reassuring. It read, suddenly, less like nothing had happened and more like someone had been careful to make sure nothing appeared to have happened at all.
Kavya sat in the blue light of the terminal with four names in front of her, and understood, with a kind of cold clarity that felt like it belonged to someone else, that Baburao Ghadge was not the first body in this hospital with an incision nobody could explain. Four people in a month, at one hospital, all sharing the exact same missing piece — no family, no questions, no autopsy — was not a coincidence in any statistical sense she’d been trained to accept. It was a pattern, and patterns in a hospital were either protocol or crime, and she had just spent a decade of her working life learning every protocol this building had, and none of them looked like this.
She thought, briefly, about simply closing the register and finishing her shift as though she’d never opened it. Nobody would ever know she’d looked. It would have been the easiest thing in the world, and for perhaps four full seconds she let herself consider it seriously, the way you consider any thought you already know you’re going to reject.
She took her phone out — against every hospital policy about patient photography, and she’d deal with that later — and photographed the second incision before the mortuary trolley came.
Her phone buzzed in her hand thirty seconds after she put it away, while she was still standing over the body. Not a call. A text, from a number with no name attached, sent to a phone whose number she had never given out at work.
We saw you take the photo. Delete it before your shift ends.








