What is your opinion?
Pretty Good Overall
"I really liked the story and found it enjoyable from beginning to end. The characters were interesting, and the plot kept my attention the whole time. It was a good experience overall, and I’m glad I gave it a try."
Summer in Crisis
"Hello Book, interesting Story about Summer, her Friend Vivian, Micha, Rio, Mason and her two younger brothers, Mother and Father. First part: leaving College early, going to Canada. Summer wants to break up with her boyfriend, but he beats her to it........Summer and her family plan a trip to Canada to see her Grandmother who is lonesome and sad, but Summer wants Vivian to come with her........The two girls leave College, go to Bahamas, Summers home, and then off to Canada.........This is a story of friendships, feelings and love. Summer says she would rather be alone, but her relationships keep her occupied..........The Story is the plot if you will..........the language barrier is difficult but understandable with effort, the writing style is innocent and that of young friends, a common way of life for those in their college days and working to pay the bills.......like Vivian.........Summers family evidently has no problem with money...........Actually enjoyed the story..........."
Swap for The Fire Seal
"Well, this has an interesting start, but it needs a lot of work. To start, the first chapter was written mostly in present tense, with a few mix ups here and there. However, the following chapters were written in past tense. It's imperative you pick one style of writing and stick with it so it doesn't come off as lazy or sloppy. After that, you need to work on having things flow smoothly. A lot of the dialogue seems jumbled and jumps from one thing to the next. There is not a lot of transition or reaction really. For example, when Micah and Summer break up, even if she was hoping for it, nothing else happens. He just says one sentence and then she just runs off and it ends abruptly. That seems to be a common issue is that things are so abrupt and jumping from one thing to the next. Best of luck with everything!"
