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COFFEE, TEA AND THEIR RESPECTIVE ISSUES (ONE SHOTS\ FLUFF
"This chapter was absolutely charming and felt incredibly real, capturing the awkward excitement, comfort, and humor of two people finally meeting after years of building a connection. The dialogue flowed naturally, and the playful banter between Edwina and Jack made their relationship feel authentic, warm, and genuinely lovable. The candy-ring proposal was both hilarious and heartfelt, ending the chapter on a sweet note that left me smiling and eager to read more. This chapter was wonderfully sweet and realistic, capturing the excitement, awkwardness, and emotional vulnerability of finally being in the same space as someone you've waited years to meet. The dual POV worked beautifully, allowing readers to see both Jack's affection and Winn's anxiety, which added depth and authenticity to their relationship. Kovu was an adorable addition, and the quiet domestic atmosphere made the entire scene feel warm, intimate, and incredibly believable."
Great start!!!💜💜💜
"I really like the story so far! It’s intriguing and definitely makes me want to keep reading. Even though there are only three chapters so far, I’d happily read the rest! Good job! 💜🤗"
