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First thoughts on first two chapters

"I love the genuine relationship between Evangeline and Fan so far. It really crafts the protective nature and father-figure mentality. The frequent air-headed moments done by both characters really adds to the comedy. I love Evangeline’s real excitement about crafting the store and hope the storefront stays a priority as more characters are introduced. I’m loving it so far, cant wait for more!!"

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