Great Story

"I really enjoyed this story. The author wrote rich characters, who continually developed throughout the story. I like how Hayley grows from having this obsession with being better than her sister to being a loving sister who risked her life for Heather. It was also interesting to watch Heather's story play out, as the reader learns more about her secrets! This developed into so much more than I expected too, with the crime and police involvement, and I definitely couldn't stop reading after that! Great story that tackled some real issues. Great work!"

Great writing!

"Very fluid, witty, entertaining writing - just the way I like it! I've learned a lot about college basketball too! I liked this story very much, and highly recommend it to others."

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Wow! :)

"Lifetime Movie Material! :)"

The Shadow of Perfection

"Sandy, your character development, story line and plot are well intertwined. Fast moving, and just a bit long. But Your characters are your Cake and Ice Creme, and they get involved in a killer on the loose and wow......great job Sandy...............keep up the writing and best of luck always in your endeavors.........."

The shadow of Perfection

"I felt like there were too much description in most parts. I liked the overall plot and I downloaded the book in the first place because I'm a younger sibling of 2 super successful girls, even if they're not as famous as Heather. Just as I had expected, I was able to relate to a huge extent. I loved it but sensed that there could've been more description on the characters feather than the basketball games because I honestly have minimal info on basketball. But seriously, continue the work. It's nice to read something like this."

The Shadow of Perfection

"This isn't the kind of story I would usually read but it was enjoyable nonetheless. The plot and characters were interesting and it made me want to keep reading to know what was going to happen next. One nitpick that I have is that there are some big paragraphs that could be shortened since it does slow the story done a bit, but other than that good job!"