The attic scene gave me chills!

"I wasn't expecting the shift in tone from a chill 2000s summer morning to an actual nightmare, but it hit hard. The contrast between normal stuff like dial-up internet and lip gloss vs. Chloe just vanishing out of nowhere made the whole thing feel way more realistic and unsettling. Valerie’s reaction felt genuine—the mix of annoyance with her siblings at first, and then the pure dread when they realize something is actually wrong. Really enjoyed the nostalgic details in the opening chapters, and the pacing during the disappearance kept me turning pages. Excited to see where the story goes!"