A nice little short story!

"First things first... the writer acknowledged that English wasn't her primary language. With that said, I overlooked grammatical errors throughout. But seriously, the storyline was enjoyable and fun to read. The author kept my interest throughout as I hoped for a happy ending. She didn't disappoint. If the author ever decides to expand on this short story, I believe she has a great opportunity to make a thriller out of this. I certainly would love to read that!"