Twenty Hearts

Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.

kenshop: Just love these two and the love that develops between them. There are some bumps along the way. In the end it works out great.

Carla Little: This is a great book! I like the story so much I don’t want it to end! I will definitely read it again.

shflfrinnn: good

Feliz: I am learning a lot about hockey because of the almost commentator-like transcript that is part of the storytelling style of the book. I like it. Coming from a country where there is no hockey culture, I am beginning to understand why it has so many fans.

raymondwrite: Hi! I hope you don’t mind me reaching out. I’m a beta reader currently offering feedback to writers who want another perspective on their stories. I focus on honest but encouraging feedback on plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, and the overall reader experience.No pressure at all—if you're interest...

Karen Nagy: This is a wonderful story with warm, endearing characters. It shows growth and acceptance of individual differences combined to make a strong unit. Loved the characters and enjoyed the writing style. Can't wait to read more!

barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama

Eileen Hulme: I liked the wringThe story is breathtaking.I’m only half way through but it’s a very good write