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The Thirteenth Note of Heaven

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Summary

The Thirteenth Note of Heaven By Ashley Tapia In a world where music holds reality together, Neris Calderwyn has always heard what others cannot: the silence between notes. But when a forbidden thirteenth note awakens, she discovers a mysterious connection to Caelan Starling, a royal composer haunted by memories of a life they may have lived—and an ending neither can escape. As forgotten cities return, lost memories unravel, and the truth behind the Great Refrain comes to light, Neris and Caelan uncover a devastating secret: their love is tangled in a cycle of erased lives and impossible choices. To free the world from a song that has controlled its destiny for centuries, they must risk everything—including the future they desperately want together. Because sometimes, the greatest act of love isn't finding a way to live forever. It's giving the world a chance to begin again. Some songs are written to be remembered. Others are written to set the world free.

Genre
Romance
Author
Ash
Status
Complete
Chapters
20
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

THE THIRTEENTH NOTE OF HEAVEN

By Ashley Tapia

Chapter 1: The Girl Who Heard Nothing

The first thing Neris Calderwyn learned about music was that everyone lied about it.

They said music was beautiful.

They said it could mend a broken heart, soothe an angry soul, and make even the cruelest person feel something good. They said the world itself had been born from a perfect melody, twelve notes woven together by the hands of the heavens.

Neris had heard all these things since childhood.

She had heard them from teachers, priests, traveling musicians, and customers who visited her little instrument shop in the lower district of Orthelia.

And every time someone said music could heal the world, Neris wanted to ask a simple question.

Then why does the world sound so terribly broken?

Of course, she never asked.

People already thought she was strange enough.

She stood behind the counter of her shop, surrounded by half-repaired violins, tarnished brass flutes, and a collection of tiny silver bells that hung from the ceiling. Morning sunlight streamed through the dusty windows, illuminating the floating specks of sawdust.

Outside, the city was waking.

The streets of Orthelia curved around towering white buildings, their rooftops crowned with crystal spires that shimmered whenever music passed through them. Golden bridges stretched between distant towers. Far above, enormous islands drifted lazily across a lavender sky, their waterfalls spilling into the clouds below.

It was a beautiful place.

Or at least, that was what everyone told her.

Neris couldn't hear the bells ringing from the central tower. She couldn't hear the musicians practicing in the square or the children singing in the streets.

She had been born unable to hear ordinary music.

But silence?

Silence was something else entirely.

It had texture. Weight. Shape.

Sometimes it felt like velvet brushing against her skin. Sometimes it pressed against her ears like deep water. And occasionally, when the world became quiet enough, Neris heard something that made her blood turn cold.

A whisper.

Not a voice, exactly.

More like the space where a voice should have been.

She had spent twenty-four years trying to explain it to herself.

She had never succeeded.

A sharp knock rattled the shop door.

Neris looked up.

An elderly man stood outside, clutching a long wooden case against his chest. His coat was embroidered with the golden crest of the royal palace.

That was unusual.

Royal messengers rarely visited the lower districts, and when they did, they certainly didn't visit a shop that repaired inexpensive instruments for struggling street performers.

Neris opened the door.

“Miss Calderwyn?”

“That depends on who's asking.”

The man blinked.

“Master Pell. Royal Conservatory.”

“Ah.” Neris glanced at the case. “If you're here about the flute I repaired last month, I can assure you it wasn't my fault the musician dropped it into a fountain.”

“I'm not here about a flute.”

“That's disappointing. I had a very good argument prepared.”

Master Pell didn't smile.

He placed the case on her counter and carefully undid its brass clasps.

Inside lay an instrument unlike anything Neris had ever seen.

It resembled a small harp, though its frame was made from a strange silvery material that seemed to shimmer between solid metal and liquid light. Twelve delicate strings stretched across its curved body. Each string bore a tiny inscription, so fine that Neris had to lean forward to examine them.

The instrument was cold.

Not merely cool to the touch.

Cold in the way winter graves were cold.

“What is it?” she asked.

“A celestial lyre.”

Neris raised an eyebrow.

“Those are supposed to be kept in the royal vault.”

“This one was.”

“What happened to it?”

Master Pell hesitated.

For the first time, Neris noticed the tremor in his hands.

“It began playing by itself three nights ago.”

She looked down at the instrument.

“That's inconvenient.”

“It played a melody no living musician recognized. Every person who heard it lost an hour of memory. Some lost considerably more.”

Neris's expression changed.

“How much more?”

“One woman forgot her husband's face. A guard forgot his own name. One of our senior composers forgot how to read music.”

“That sounds less like an instrument and more like a terrible dinner guest.”

“Miss Calderwyn.”

“Sorry.”

She wasn't.

Master Pell leaned closer.

“The royal conservators have examined it. They cannot determine the cause. Its strings refuse to respond to ordinary tuning, and anyone who attempts to play it hears a different melody.”

“And you brought it to me because?”

“Because your name appeared in the instrument's original registry.”

Neris stared at him.

“My name?”

“Your full name. Neris Calderwyn.”

“That registry must be several centuries old.”

“Four hundred and twelve years.”

“Then I'm sure the Neris Calderwyn you're looking for is a very different woman.”

“We checked the records.”

“Records can be wrong.”

“Not these.”

Neris folded her arms.

She disliked mysteries that arrived carrying official paperwork. They tended to become expensive.

Nevertheless, she reached for the lyre.

The moment her fingers touched its frame, the shop changed.

Not visibly.

The walls remained where they were. The windows stayed intact. Master Pell continued standing on the other side of the counter.

But something beneath the world shifted.

The silence around Neris suddenly deepened.

She felt it gather in the corners of the room, pouring beneath the door, slipping between the cracks in the floorboards.

Then she heard it.

A single note.

It was unlike the strange whispers she had experienced throughout her life. This sound was clear, sharp, and impossibly distant, as though someone had plucked a string at the farthest edge of existence.

Neris snatched her hand away.

The sound stopped.

“What happened?” Master Pell demanded.

She swallowed.

“Nothing.”

He studied her face.

“Did you hear something?”

Neris almost laughed.

She had spent her entire life telling people she couldn't hear music. Now a royal artifact had produced a sound unlike anything she had ever experienced, and the last thing she wanted was to explain it.

“No,” she lied.

Master Pell looked unconvinced.

“Can you repair it?”

Neris examined the twelve strings.

There were no visible breaks. No loose pegs. No damage to the frame.

The instrument was perfect.

And somehow, that made it worse.

“I can try.”

“Excellent.”

“Repairing doesn't mean I can make it stop eating people's memories.”

“I understand.”

“No, I don't think you do. I charge extra for haunted instruments.”

For the first time, Master Pell almost smiled.

He left the lyre in her care and departed with a promise to return before sunset.

Neris locked the door behind him.

Then she turned back to the instrument.

For several minutes, she simply stared at it.

Twelve strings.

Twelve recognized notes.

Twelve pieces of the melody that supposedly held the universe together.

She had heard those stories her entire life. Every child in Orthelia learned that the First Composers had created existence through music, shaping mountains, oceans, stars, and living souls from a perfect arrangement of sound.

The Great Refrain, held once every seven years, renewed that harmony.

The next ceremony was only six days away.

And now a royal instrument was playing impossible music, stealing memories, and somehow recognizing a woman who had never set foot inside the palace.

Wonderful.

Absolutely wonderful.

Neris fetched her tuning tools and began examining the strings one by one.

The first was silver.

The second was pale gold.

The third was so dark it seemed to swallow the light around it.

She tested each string carefully, pressing it with a wooden pick and watching for the slightest vibration.

Nothing.

No sound.

No movement.

She tried again.

Still nothing.

Frustration tightened her jaw.

“Come on,” she muttered. “You're an instrument. You're supposed to make a sound.”

The lyre remained silent.

Neris leaned closer.

Then she noticed something.

Beneath the twelve strings, carved into the inner curve of the frame, was a tiny symbol she hadn't seen before.

A circle divided into thirteen sections.

Twelve sections contained delicate markings.

The thirteenth was empty.

No.

Not empty.

Scratched away.

Someone had deliberately removed whatever had once been written there.

Neris ran a fingertip across the damaged surface.

The moment her skin touched the carving, the whisper returned.

Find me.

She jerked backward, knocking a box of wooden tuning pegs onto the floor.

Her heart hammered against her ribs.

The shop was silent.

Perfectly silent.

Then, from somewhere beyond the walls, came another whisper.

Before he remembers.

Neris froze.

“Who?” she whispered.

The lyre's strings began to glow.

One after another, the twelve strings filled with pale golden light. The symbols along the frame shimmered, and the air above the counter rippled like heat rising from summer stone.

Neris reached for the instrument.

She should have left it alone.

She knew that.

But curiosity had always been her most expensive habit.

She touched the first string.

Nothing happened.

The second.

Nothing.

The third.

Still nothing.

She moved along the strings until her finger hovered over the twelfth.

The whisper grew louder.

Find me.

Neris drew a breath and plucked the string.

For the first time in her life, she heard music.

It wasn't beautiful.

It was enormous.

The sound rushed through her like a storm breaking over a mountain, carrying the weight of distant oceans and the brightness of a thousand collapsing stars. Every object in the shop trembled. The silver bells overhead shattered, scattering fragments across the floor.

Neris stumbled backward.

The lyre continued glowing.

And then something happened that should have been impossible.

A thirteenth string appeared.

It stretched across the empty space beneath the others, thin as a strand of moonlight.

Neris couldn't breathe.

The new string pulsed once.

Twice.

Then it played itself.

The note was so pure that, for one terrible instant, Neris felt as though the universe had stopped moving to listen.

Outside, every bell in Orthelia fell silent.

The floating islands halted in the sky.

The waterfalls hanging above the clouds froze in midair.

Across the city, thousands of people turned toward the royal palace, unable to explain the sudden emptiness in their hearts.

And somewhere inside Ravenhollow Palace, a young composer dropped to his knees.

Caelan Starling had been rehearsing for the Great Refrain when the forbidden note reached him.

He had never heard it before.

Yet he knew it.

He knew the shape of it, the ache of it, the terrible beauty hidden inside its silence.

Most of all, he knew the woman who had played it.

He saw her face.

Dark curls. Golden eyes. A small scar near her left eyebrow.

Neris Calderwyn.

He remembered holding her hand beneath a sky full of broken stars.

He remembered her laughing as they ran through a city that no longer existed.

He remembered kissing her beneath an unfamiliar moon.

And he remembered her dying.

Her fingers had been tangled in his coat. Blood had darkened the front of her dress. She had looked up at him with tears shining in her eyes and whispered something he had spent what felt like lifetimes trying to understand.

When the music ends, don't look for me.

Then she had gone still in his arms.

Caelan pressed a shaking hand against his mouth.

“No,” he whispered.

The memory vanished.

He was left kneeling on the marble floor, surrounded by startled musicians, with tears running down his face.

He had never met Neris Calderwyn.

He was certain of that.

And yet he remembered losing her.

Far below the palace, in a small instrument shop, Neris stood trembling before the celestial lyre.

The thirteenth string had disappeared.

The golden light faded.

The world began moving again.

Waterfalls resumed their descent. Bells rang across the city. The people of Orthelia returned to their ordinary lives, unaware that reality had briefly held its breath.

Neris stared at the instrument.

Then she noticed a final change.

The scratched symbol beneath the strings was no longer empty.

A name had appeared in the thirteenth section.

CAELAN STARLING.

Beneath it, in letters so small she almost missed them, were four additional words.

He remembers the ending.

Neris stepped away from the counter.

For the first time in her life, she wished she could hear nothing at all.

Because now she understood the most frightening part.

The silence had not been warning her about something that might happen.

It had been calling her toward something that had already happened.

And somewhere in the royal palace, a man she had never met was remembering the moment she died.

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