Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Alex&Finn

"I’m only 16 chapters in, but I’m already way too invested in Alex and Finn. Their chemistry is probably my favorite thing about the story so far — there’s so much tension between them, but it still feels really natural and not rushed. I also like that they both feel like actual people instead of perfect romance characters. Some of their interactions genuinely made me smile, and at this point I keep thinking “okay, one more chapter” because I really want to know what happens between them. Definitely excited to see where this goes "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Cat sitting.....

"It says the story is completed? It definitely does not feel finished. I like the idea of the story....but anyone who owns a cat, knows they don’t need a cat sitter for a few hours away.....a little dog, yes. I’d like to see where the relationship between these 2 progresses. And there are things that need resolving with Alex’s flatmates as well. And perhaps more understanding of an ADHD diagnosis(?) that requires Ritalin.... The good news is that there are a lot of things going on that can be expanded upon. Looking forward to reading more....."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation