What is your opinion?
Incredible Banter and Amazing Characters!
"I am absolutely adoring this story! The banter between the two main characters is hilarious and incredibly engaging. I definitely love Amelia ❤️—she is so sharp and brilliant and strong. Maybe almost too much at times, but it perfectly fits who she is and what she’s been through (I guess 😅). I’m really curious to see if her edges will soften over time or not 🤔. Adrian, of course, earns major points with every chapter. The image you have of him at the beginning slowly unravels into something with a completely different nuance, and it's fascinating to discover what lies beneath the surface. I also love that the characters are primarily revealed through their actions and dialogue, while still keeping a solid balance with their internal reflections. Grammatically, the writing is flawless. My only minor critique is about the sentence structure. I personally prefer very short sentences when they're used to make specific moments stand out. During internal reflections, I would have smoothed out the narrative flow a bit more and saved the short, punchy sentences for the core concepts that need emphasis. But that's purely a matter of personal taste 😆🥸! Also, perhaps because English isn't my first language, the rapid-fire dialogue sometimes makes me lose track of who is speaking, though a quick reread always clears it up😅. That being said, I am eagerly waiting to see how things unfold and I absolutely cannot wait for them to kiss 🩷❤️🧡💛💚🩵💙💜... I want it so badly 🥹, but I guess I'll just have to wait 😝!"
slow burn!
"the plot is so compelling. it follows the story of Amelia who desperately need money and end up in contract marriage with Adrian."
