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Very Inspiring

"This book makes you relized what life really is. During tough times we need inspiration and this book is very inspiring. This book made me realize that we need to cheerish life, love yourself, and never give up. No matter what other people think about you. Love yourself❤❤"

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Inspiring!!

"I must say that I am inspired!! If I had known when I started reading this short story how deeply the words would touch on my life, my existence I would have oh i don’t know what i would do.... that’s it the thing is I feel exactly the way she felt and I don’t have running. I don’t know how to grow as she did but im sick of feeling this way my whole life and i need my running to guide me?? This book is so touching and written with emotions and it makes me feel. That is a great book and this is an amazing story!! You must read this if you have ever felt lost and alone or not good enough this inspiring book will show you you are not alone and you could grow! I definitely loved this beautiful story and it is deserving of the stars I gave it!! "

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Rapacious Bill of Goods

"BePublished, and that name should be well-contemplated, has written what I would call a purely ‘virtual,’ while ‘virtu’ less--this is no object of art--novel. Its genre is self help, echoing many works from the contemporary, ill-fated, ‘A Million Little Pieces,’ to the Middle English drama classic, ‘Everyman.’ The title, and ensuing psychological, and sexual, darkness, recalls Pynchon’s ‘Gravity’s Rainbow.’ Yet, it’s exactly that novel’s opposite. Non-historic, setting no scenes, as the scenarist does in cinema, and promoting only one memorable character, outside its protagonist Mary—her arch nemesis, the mind/body fucker, Alex--it almost seems a computer could have generated this story, as there is little or no informing sensibility other than one that is post-New Age and #MeToo, issue orientated. The authorial voice is entirely self-centered and obsessed with its heroine, the rape victim, Mary. Yet, the hot button issue—the actual event—is for me attractively, poetically glossed, which, while somewhat of a relief, deals a hand with reduced stakes. Predictably, it is a page-turner plus because of its relentless victimhood pandering, until the closing revelations and transformation give it a very solid purpose—all from a thumbnail sketch of someone’s ferocious personal calamities, coming hard, one after another, ostensibly aimed at keeping the reader glued to the page. That said, I highly recommend jumping into this guilty pleasure of today’s quick fix enlightenment—and enjoy!"

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Makes you feel whole

"The author has been through a lot and has taken an enormous effort penning down the feelings if someone in pain , unbearable pain. Not only the but unlike fantasy,there in true emotion throughout the book. It beautifully portrays the failures in life and how they leave us drained. The journey Mary takes towards healing herself applies to almost everyone ( atleast for Mary and me) . A must for anybody trying to get out of any kind of sorrow or loss. A fullfilling book. 💫💫💫"

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