Descent

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Summary

An innocent surgical resident, a disturbed police detective, and a serial killer make for interesting bedfellows.... Dr. Grayson Carter had a good life. She was in the last year of her residency training, primed and ready for one of the most premier orthopedic trauma fellowships in the country. She had wonderful friends, a fulfilling career...what she thought was the perfect life. Not anymore. The sudden death of her protege has turned her world upside down. What started out as an unfortunate accident has quickly turned into a horrific murder. As the fall days tick away, the life she has worked so hard for is steadily slipping through her fingers, a happy life exchanged for excruciating chaos. ***** Detective Gabriel Ryder was on thin ice. His last case had been a disaster. A child was dead, another would never wake up, and it was his fault. He couldn't sleep. His partner of four years had all but submitted his transfer papers. The position he had worked so hard for was disappearing before his eyes, and there wasn’t a thing he could do to stop it. But now, an early-morning call out to a local seminary holds his career in the balance. If only he'd known just how much of his life would change with a single chance meeting....

Genre
Thriller,Mystery
Author
A
Status
Complete
Chapters
58
Rating
4.8 (5 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

The echoing click of the lock broke the quiet serenity of the room, ricocheting violently down the hall and across the vaulted ceilings. The large wooden door swung open after it, gracefully gliding against the marble floor. Moonlight filtered down through the intricate stained glass windows, throwing eerily dark and distorted figures onto the eastern wall. The lights were off. The pews were empty. A few burned-down candles flickered helplessly in the sanctuary.

Perfect.

A lone, dark figure strode silently between the polished wooden benches, carrying a bundle wrapped in white. The thin fabric billowed out around him like gossamer wings on the breeze. He paused at the steps leading up to the sanctuary, bowed his head to pray, then stepped up to the glistening marble altar and lay her down upon it. The meager candlelight reflected off of the gold flecks in the stone and through her bright red hair. Bowed, long fingers passed through the autumn curls and down the side of her face. She wasn’t perfect, but she was close. And still so beautiful.

The figure circled the altar, lighting a single ivory pillar and placing it at the top of the sanctuary stairs. He descended the steps lightly, the soles of his shoes barely making a sound on the marble floor. He paused at the second pew, his arm outstretched and his fingers resting on the polished wood.

“Per me si va ne l’etterno dolore. Per me si va la perduta gente. E io etterno duro. Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch’entrate.”

Through me you go to everlasting pain. Through me you go to pass among lost souls. And I endure eternally. Abandon all hope, ye who enter here.

The words faded off into the night air. He retreated into the dark, his long, nimble fingers caressing the edge of each pew as he went. The door closed silently behind him. The oppressive silence of the night descended from its hiding place in the corners of the ceiling.

He’d never been there at all.

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