Intriguing subject matter

"I love pirates, and a good pirate love story is wonderful. I like the main characters they are cool, but the story itself is boring. I’m trying to stay with it hopeful that maybe it will start to get exciting or interesting at all. It has a great plot, but the story itself isn’t executing the plot very well. There’s no exciting interactions with Blackthorn, she spent more time in this story with Aldrick then she does with the love interest. The author is failing to make it seem like the pirate is interested in her at all, or even why they are interested in each other. This story to be honest seems derivative, it’s lacking real imagination."