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The forbidden village

"Loved everything about it and could not put it down "

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👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

"PHENOMENAL WRITING!!!! The twists *chefskiss* I WANT MORE! LOL"

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Like the story. Lots of imagination

"Very thing was good but grammar needs to be checked. Few things did understand like it took 3 days horse ride for them to reach village but someone was already there. Why didn’t the travel together or explain how she got their"

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The Forbidden Village

"I loved the plot of this book! Very interesting and captivating, I even got my sister to start reading it. Will there be another follow up book? "

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Nice story

"I love this story "

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Love it

"Loved it! Need at least an epilogue Highly recommend reading it"

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Loved it. Was an exciting read and different from the usual fantasy stories.

"Was a gripping read. Very different from the usual fantasy stories and I appreciated that. That also made it unique and it didn't even need erotic scenes to keep you captivated. Kudos to the writer. 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕"

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The Forbidden Village

"This is an amazing story!! "

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The forbidden village

"This is a fantastic story so far, very cryptic with the memory loss and bringing them back slowly and the feelings that Lucy has of nagging things in her head. It definitely keeps me as a reader involved. I can't wait to finish"

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Amazing story 🥰

"Thank you for this amazing story"

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Forbidden Village

"I really love this book, it held my attention from beginning till the end. The words just flowed, smooth story telling!!! Loved the characters.."

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Fantasy Epicness Deluxe

"For me this was a very well written and interesting story. I loved the style and the originality. If you're a sucker for fantasy stories like me, then you're probably going to love this book, too. Can't wait for a sequel though :)"

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Need more of this!! Sequel please?

"I love the story and the world you've created!! Would it be too mutch to ask for a sequel focusing on Avin and Lucy?? Cheers and thanks for the experience!! "

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The Forbidden village

"Very interesting and engaging read. The plot twist was great. 👍👍👍👍"

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The Forbidden Village

"i’ve never been so engaged in a book! i love it so much it’s not funny"

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Great book!

"Soom grammar issues but well worth reading! "

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The forgotten village

"Loved the book couldnt put it down."

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Great book

"Amazing story with really well developed characters. The storyline and world you created is fun and interesting. "

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love it!!

"I hope you go back to updating it one day, the book is amazing. "

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Action packed

"Loved the characters and the way it all worked together at the end. The writing could use some proofing, and I would have liked to see more characters that had come from Earth revealed."

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